how to deal with less important data - ielts writing task 1 bar chart

Here's the ielts writing task 1 bar chart used in this video:
The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.

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0:00 introductory paragraph
02:08 overview paragraph
03:45 details paragraph 1
08:29 details paragraph 2
10:04 entire essay + key takeaways

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The bar chart compares the proportion of weekly income that households spent on eight types of essential goods and services categories in one particular country in the years 1968 and 2018.

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[omjwad]

Hi Lillie, why did you say the proportion of weekly income, and not the proportions of weekly income in paragraph 1?

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[heattransfer]

The chart illustrates the average percentages of expediture of families in one country weekly in 1968 and in 2018. Overall, majority of spent accounted for food while the minority of money was allocated to fuel and power.
An average family in 1968 spent 35% of their income in a week while this rate decreased approximately to 18% which was the sharpest decrease among others. In contrast, housing expenditure experienced one-fifth of the total income in a week and this rate increased almost 20%, compared to food category. Another striking fact that, the money allocated for household goods did not see any change at about 8% in 1968 and 2018.
The fuel and power that contributed the least percentage of money allocated for total expenditure saw 10% in 1968 and this rate went down under 5%. Same trend can be seen in clothing and footware category. Regular families spent 10% of their income in clothing and footware and this rate fell by half in 2018.

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