THIS Common App Essay Got Her Into Every School She Applied To!!!

Today we’ll be analyzing the common app essay that got this MySterIouS sTud3nT into every single school she applied to!

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7:20 Reveal!
8:33 #1 College Essay Tip

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[Pluviophile-xx]

"My dear virtual little siblings" is a phrase we can hear only from your videos 🌟

[gedeonbelayneh]

Hey, I visited your website and saw your pricing for professional review of one’s essay. I wish I could afford any of that but given that 1$ is now equivalent to 117 Ethiopian Birr: there is no way neither I nor my family can afford it. If you are giving away free edits, please take me into account. Much love and respect Kevin.

[Edits.Editing]

I’ve been watching your videos a lot! They helped me so much to plan out my Highschool years, thank you so much!!!

[Vence.]

Would love a video on transfer admissions/transfer essay writing. Especially when an application has both a why transfer personal statement and why us supplement

[solaryikes]

Great video, as always, and energy provided.

Quick question: Are we allowed to create a fictional story for our college essay?

[pastry.]

Hey can you tell me what kind of honors I should have, because I only have school and regional ones. What should I do to increase my reach?

[randomperson]

Please make a video about how to get into WashU!

[BPrashantMehto]

Should I apply to multiple EA or REA? Does it affect my application and colleges know if i applied to multiple schools?

[EmmanuelleDIBY]

Hey Kev I need your help. I know you do it to earn more money but I really can't afford my dad is not willing to pay and it's really overwhelming to go trough university application as an international student. I hope u understand it and would help me thank you ❤

[xyxyxyxcollegeapps]

hey! just a question which topic seems like a better topic for my common app, 1-being the organising committee (volunteer) head for my school's model UN. I have a lot of scenarios to involve and how it impacted others in those 3 days of conference.( i can also involve me being house captain in my school)

2- my passion for fashion and how my class i and hosted a bake and make sale making rakhis( indian thing) and donated the money we raised etc.. talking ab my passion and me leading this as well as what i took away from it.

Also looking forward to sign up for ur essay reviewing once the topic is decided lol im just indecisive right now.I would love some advice on which seems better

[MiriamLevenson]

i just found out one of you went to ezra stiles--you def know my dad lol!

[mukhammadjumaboev]

Is the “Write Your Way Into College” by Jeffrey Yu ‘23 still available?

[saltinecrackers]

KEVIN! HELP A FELLOW RESTAURANT KID OUT!

Is writing about my experience at the restaurant too common? If so, any ideas? I'm in dire need of your help.