Do NOT Make This College Essay Mistake

[boomjelly.-.]

“Thinking about working hard, makes me hard”
A true legend made that quote

[xrtus]

YOU are telling ME that "thinking about working hard, makes me hard" DOESNT CAPTURE YOUR ATTENTION

[shoogvs]

“thinking about working hard, makes me hard” is a pretty engaging hook to me

[carbonari]

Hey the voice who was speaking the essay was Gohar

[dracosol]

“Thinking about working hard makes me hard”
ACCEPTED

[jndavs]

Use the most engaging hook of all... "my father made a large donation to this school"

[TalkandListen]

Definitely Gohar khan doing the voice over

[Some_Stranger]

I love how they stopped every sound so the “Just thinking about working hard makes me hard” would be so clear

[aegontargaryen]

“Thinking about working hard, makes me hard”
Is that david goggins?

[Adam-pvqn]

Essay: "Prestidigitation, P R E S . . ."
Admissions: "BORING!" *throws away*
Essay: "Thinking about working hard, gets me hard."
Harvard: "Bro, want a scholarship?"

[Trimarkovich]

“Just thinking about working hard gets me hard”

Guess what’s going in my college essay

[VikkieEule]

This reminds me of the dumb greentext that talked about "I throw away half of the resumes I get, I dont want unlucky people."

[nunyabiznez]

My admission's essay started out like this:

She lay their naked screaming...

[jaredrains]

I used to do this on essays anyway but High school English class squashed my confidence in it...

[mandad]

my cousin wrote about why kanye was her favorite rap artist for her harvard essay back in 2016. she was accepted lol

[NyikaWachira]

did he say “just thinking about working hard MAKES ME HARD?” Wtf 😂

[tayar]

Ok they're so obviously brothers, no cap

[EliteGamerRanger]

“Thinking about working hard makes me hard”💀💀💀

[stuartsheppard]

Thinking about working hard gets me hard, I was cracking up

[thespiritqueen]

“Just thinking about working hard gets me hard”
Nah this is staged, no one would flip past that one 💀