Band 9 IELTS Writing Task 2 SAMPLE ANSWER | Discuss both views

New IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer (discussing two views and giving your opinion) can help you improve your writing and achieve a higher score.
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00:00 IELTS Writing Task 2
01:39 How to address your task fully
03:37 What is the best essay structure
05:40 Introduction
06:37 Body paragraph 1
09:06 Body paragraph 2
10:32 Conclusion
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[faddyoraha]

I read another teacher guide band 9 essays and his structure was for the discuss both sides + opinion was to give your opinion in the conclusion and to avoid 'i agree' and instead use impersonal pronouns such as 'it's logical to conclude' or 'it seems to me that'. And for the 'to what extent you agree question' he said to write your opinion in the introduction and in the conclusion, in addition to add a concession paragraph as well

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Thank you Asiya. Your video was the last a watched before entering the exam hall and luckily for me I got an essay with this same format in task 2

[ehsandaryadel]

There is a heated debate about whether States should provide subsidies for fruits and vegetables making everyone afford to eat healthily or it is better to impose taxes on Junk food to reduce demand for these types of food. I personally think that the first approach would be a more effective way.

On the one hand, I agree that to make unhealthy foods like pizza and French fries less appealing, taxing such dishes might play a key role to change eating habits of individuals. In other words, when the prices of such items increase, the purchasing power of buyers will decrease, thus they naturally tend to move towards much healthier diets. For instance, after Iranian government started to raise the costs of fast foods, tendency of those craving for hamburgers and processed food significantly reduced as a result. It, however, should be mentioned that this policy has forced a huge number of fast food chains out of business. Therefore, I reckon that a better solution can do less harm.

On the other hand, helping farmers and gardeners through mobilizing them financially to produce organic food, is thought to have a positive impact on consumers’ eating habits, since this policy enables them to purchase more quality produces less expensive. For example, intake of fresh vegetables and fruits has been rising among Americans since the official authorities scrambled to offer generous subsidies to agricultural land owners and sell their products more reasonably. Therefore, I am of this opinion that by implementing this plan, it is highly likely to observe people tending to change their diet to have more nutritious foods.

In conclusion, despite the fact that it is commonly believed that affordability of healthy food is possible through taxation, I strongly agree that the more suitable alternative to do so is to give subsidies to fruits and vegetables.