BAND 9 IELTS Writing Task 1 SAMPLE | Academic - Pie Charts

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My response which I wrote before watching the video:

The pie charts illustrate the daily intake of sodium, saturated fat and added sugar by the average adult in the United Kingdom. Overall, meals with sodium and saturated fat are mainly consumed during dinner, whereas snacks have the highest fraction of added sugar.

Dinner for UK citizens is rich in sodium as it accounts for 42% of their daily intake. Lunch comes second with more than a quarter, while both breakfast and snacks constitute 30% of sodium consumption per day.

The trend of saturated fats intake is similar to that of sodium, albeit the proportions are slightly different. The reported percentages were 39%, 26%, 19% and 16% for dinner, lunch, snacks and breakfast, respectively.

Added sugars, on the other hand, depict a different behaviour. Snacks rank at the top with 45%, followed by lunch and dinner as both contributed to about a fifth of added sugar consumption. Finally, breakfast had the least nutrients involving added sugars, with only 16%.

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[ashwinaabarath]

The pie charts illustrate the proportion of sodium, saturated fat and added sugar taken in during meals by adults in the UK. Excessive intake of any of those nutrients may lead to undesirable repercussions affecting one’s health.
Overall, the consumption of all the three nutrients for breakfast and lunch were relatively lower compared to snacks and dinner. This shows that that the UK adults consume a healthier and balanced meal during the 2 vital meals of the day, whereas dinner contains the most sodium and saturated fat. Most of the added sugar is taken in during sncaks.


According to the pie charts, adults in the UK consume around 13% to16% sodium, saturated fat and added sugar during breakfast which is clearly on the healthy end of the spectrum. The intake of the same nutrients during dinner make up almost three-fifth of the pie charts, at which sodium and added sugar is the most and least consumed nutrition accounting for 28% and 19% respectively.

On the other hand, the intake of all three nutrients appear to be less balanced during dinner and snacks. The intake of sodium during dinner were among the highest, at around 42% while during snacks, added sugar is noted to be the most consumed nutrition. Meanwhile, the daily consumption of saturated fat during snacks and dinner is 19% and 39% respectively.

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[nerdykid]

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Listening : 8
Speaking : 7.5

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Thanks Alot for ur vedios..
They help me alot..
My exam was on 25 jul 2020
And today my result is declare...
L=7.50,
R=6.00,
W=6.00,
S=7.00,
OverAll=6.50

Thanks alot for ur support...i get ds score only because of ur guidance !

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[luizcadu]

15:34 I think the same goes for the word "people" too. If it means "more than one person", it is uncountable. However, if it refers to different groups of people, ethnicities and cultures, the plural "peoples" can be used.