100 Essays: How Real Band 9 Students Use Samples

Are you looking to improve your IELTS writing score? Look no further! In this video, you will have access to 100 Band 7, 8, and 9 sample essays written by real students and checked by real examiners.

Not only will you have access to these essays, but you will also learn how not to use them and be given 10 ways you can use these sample essays to improve your own writing score.

This video is perfect for students looking to achieve a higher score on the IELTS writing test. Don't miss out and watch now!

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00:00 Introduction
01:20 5 Things NOT To Do With Samples
07:21 10 Strategies for Using IELTS Writing Samples

[Mariam_Konstant]

I did my exam on 7th January 2023, and I just got my result. Speaking: 7, Writing: 7, Listening : 8.5, Reading: 8.5. Overall Band: 8. Thank you Chris

[lamp]

Take advice with a grain of salt. The summary is just a summary; the video gives applicable advice.
Don’t do :
1. Don’t use fake sample essays.
2. Don’t passively read essays and expect anything.
3. Don’t try to rate the essays and figure out why you’re better.
4. Don’t look for things to copy.
5. Don’t copy and paste the essay onto your exam.

Do (work on the techniques you are weak on):
1. Cover up the essay. Try to come up with relevant ideas for the question. 8:54
- Compare your ideas and the essay’s. If your ideas are similar you are probably on the right track. (Of course, if they are different that does not necessarily mean your ideas are bad.)
2. Develop the ideas. 10:55
3. Think about what structure the essay used. 12:30
4. Improving coherence and cohesion. 15:24
5. Identify mistakes in the essay. 17:05
- Think about why these mistakes were made and identify what kind of mistakes they are.
6. Think about the grammatical structures and tenses used. 18:00
7. This point is non-existent lol.
8. Identify vocabulary / collocations you are unsure about and try to guess their meanings based on the context. 19:33
9. Identify vocabulary errors. 21:07
10. Write and compare your own essay to the sample essays. 22:02

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