IELTS Line Graph - 📈📉Writing Task 1 - Sample Answer from a TEACHER

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The line graph gives us the information on the percentage of student enrolments in 3 different subjects, which are medicine, science, and humanities at a regional university from 1960 to 2020.

In general, the popularity of humanities decreased significantly. On the other hand, medicine has gained popularity over the 6 decades. Science, however, remained stable over this particular period.

Humanities lost it’s popularity over time, starting at 45% in 1960 and ended at less than 10% in 2020. This downward trend caused humanities to be the least popular course in that particular regional university.

Contrary to humanities, medicine gained popularity during the period. It started at 20% in 1960 and has the highest of 35% in 2000, ended at 30% in 2020.

Science did not experience that much of a difference. It remained stable. It started at 30% in 1960, had a slight decrease in 1980, but gained it’s popularity back in 2000, and finished at 30% in 2020.

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The line graph illustrates the information regarding the intake of distinct kind of meat in between 1979 and 2004, in a European country.

Overall, it can be vivid that the consumption of beef and lamb revealed downward trend, whereas consumption of chicken indicated an upward trend, throughout the given period of time.

To begin with, the consumption of beef was nearly 210 gram per person a week in 1997 and 240 gram was in 1985. The figure of per week intake of beef stood at 180 grams in 1979 and then reached at roughly 100 grams in 2004. In 1979, the utilisation of meat by per person was 55 grams which further remained stable in all given years.

Moving further, the consumption of chicken am lamb was at similar point, 150 grams in 1976, while in 1994, the utilisation of meat by person rose gradually and reached approximately at 240 grames, meanwhile, intake of lamb declined moderately and the figure was 70 grams. In 2004, the consumption of chicken was 250 grams which indicated it's worth stating feature.

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The line graph compares the number of households in one US city that uses different types of technology to watch television namely satellite, cable, internet, and broadcast from 2004 to 2014.

Overall, the use of satellite and cable increased while broadcast kept decreasing throughout the years. On the other hand, cable usage fluctuated mildly and decreased by the end of the period.

In 2004, around 70, 000 households uses satellites as their choice of techology to watch television. This number did not change much throughout the years, showing mild growth in the graph until finally reaching almost 120, 000 in 2014. On the other hand, internet usage increased drastically, even having roughly 190, 000 users at the end of the period. Although internet had the lowest user count in 2004, the numbers quickly grew and it became the most popular choice above all.

The users of cables experienced slight fluctuation in the middle of the period until finally decreasing in 2014. Surprisingly, while broadcast users had the highest number in 2004, they fell and only had around 20, 000 users in 2014.

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The line graph illustrates data on the proportion of students who enrolled in three different subjects at a regional university from 1960 to 2020.

Overall, trends in medicine increased during the given period, while proportion of humanities witnessed a dramatic decrease. Science maintained the same level over the 60-year period.

Popularity of medicine increased over the period, starting at 20% in 1960 and reached a record high in 2000. After this point, it declined gradually and finished at 30% in 2020.

Humanities experienced a very significant decrease . In 1960 it reached a peak of 45%
After that, it continued a dramatic decline over the next period. Student enrollments of humanities went down to 7% in 2020, becoming the least popular subject.

Science stay constant over the period. In 1960 it had 30% of student enrolments. Over the next 40 years it decreased slightly. But, then enrolments returned back to 30% in 2020.

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The graph provides information on the popularity of three subject courses at a local university from 1960 to 2020.

Overall, by the end of the period, Humanity had lost its dominance in the percentage of student enrolments, while, Conversely, Medicine had gained popularity. The percentage of enrolments in Science was fairly stable throughout the timeline.

In 1960, Humanities was the most popular subject, with around 45% of the sum of enrolments. This ratio was constant until 1970. However, by 2020, Humanities had suffered a sharp decrease in popularity and reached 7% in total student enrolments.

In 1960, Science had around 30% of the total enrolments. It had lost some percent until 1990 but regained all by 2020. But it was relatively stable throughout the timeline.

In 1960, Medicine was the least popular course among students, with 20% of total enrolments. Its popularity saw a rise until 2000, having around 34% and reaching its maximum during the period. However, from 2000 to 2020, it lost some of its enrolments and reached 30%.

The subject with the most significant changes was Humanities, with around 40% reduction, and the subject with the most minor and negligible variation was Science. The only course that attracted more students, with respect to the beginning of the 60 years, was Medicine, with a 10% rise. Interestingly, in the year 1986, all three courses had around the same amount of students, equal to about 27%.

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The table gives information about the international visitors to Canada from four different countries: The United States, India, Nigeria, and The Philippines; in the years: 1950, 1980, and 2015.
Overall, the tourists from all four countries were on rise, but the highest number of visitors were from the United States whereas the lowest from Nigeria. India and the Philippines witnessed drastic increase in tourists.
The United States witnessed an increase with a peak of 11, 500, 000 in the year 2015 which started at around 4, 300, 000 in 1950. Visitors from Nigeria in 1950 was 20, 000 and reached 250, 000 in the year 2015 which demonstrated a stable trend and became the least number of visitors compared to others.
India and the Philippines illustrated a medium-paced upward trend. Initially, India was at the lowest influx of tourists around 5, 000 which increased dramatically to peak at 550, 000. In case of the Philippines, it ranked second in all the three years, reaching up to 600, 000 tourists, doubling every year.
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This illustrated line graph represents data on the popularity of medicine, humanities, and science subjects at a regional university from 1960 to 2020.
Overall, the popularity of medicine went up while humanities experienced a significant drop in the percentage of enrolments. Science remained relatively the same over the 60 years.
Medicine rose to its highest popularity in 2000 and slightly declined to 30% in 2020. By contrast, medicine experienced a 10% upward trend from 1960 to 2020.
Humanities showed a tiny increment from early 1960 to late 1960. But after early 1970 the popularity of the subject dramatically fell by about 30%. As a result of that, this subject was the least popular one in 2020.
Moreover, science occupied a slight reduction in its popularity from 1960 to 1990. After 1990 the popularity bounced back to its previous level in 2020. Science and medicine had the same popularity level of 30% in 2020, being the most popular courses among the three selected subjects.

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The line graph illustrates the data on the enrollment in Humanties, science and medcian subjects at areginonal universiry from 1960 to 2020.

Overall, there was an increase in the percentage of students enrollment in medicine subject over the period. In clear contrast Humanities subject experienced a noticeable decrease while science reamined relatively stable over a 60-year period.

Humanities subject experienced a decline in rate. It started by increasing considerably until 1970 before falling significantly to approximately 7% in 2020.

an increase in pupils enrollment was apparent in the category medicine subject. The proprtion of medicine subject enrollment increased slightly from exactly afifth in 1960 to around 35%, which was an apex in 2000. After this point, it declined slightly to precisely 30% in 2010.
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Science figure remained relatively stable.Whereas the science' figure began at exactly 30%, and it had fallen to just under 30% by 2000, but then it return the same at the beginning at 30%.

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