IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 SAMPLE ANSWER | Band 9 | Chart + Table

Check out this full Band 9 sample answer to an IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 topic reported in one of the recent exams (a line graph + table).

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00:00 Task 1 Academic sample
00:31 Task: chart and table
03:20 Task 1 structure
04:54 Introduction
06:40 Overview
09:20 Body paragraph 1
12:17 Body paragraph 2
14:49 Full sample answer

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[inamdarnishit]

Hello Asiya. I scored overall 7 band with just one week of preparation. I had my exam scheduled on 2 February 2022. Your videos helped me gain confidence and achieve success. Thank you so much :)

[idowuafinowi]

Thank you Asiya for your tutorial. I wrote my IELTS academic on the 9th of July, 2022, in Nigeria and I had a 7.5 band score. I followed your approach to answer my task one. I had a 7 in writing. I'm so shocked. Thank you so much. It was multiple pie charts that came out in the Task one of the writing test.

[AM-xcol]

Hi Asiya, thank you so much. Your tips really make a difference. I got L-8.5 R- 9 W- 7.5 S-7.5. overall 8

[caiorena]

Hi, Thanks for the subjects you bring to us all of them are quite useful. I am preparing myself for the exam next week. Hope i can score a 7 band overall.

[vrindachopra]

Ty for all your work! I scored 8 bands overall with only about 4 days of preparation:)
Listening - 9
Speaking - 7.5
Reading - 9
Writing - 6.5

I'm very grateful to you.

[catilyn]

Hi, Asiya~!! I wanted to say thank you for all your videos and your guidance. Because of you, I was able to score a 8 band in my exam!! Thank you so much for all your wonderful content ♥️ ♥️

[aayushgupta]

Hi, seeking a review of my attempt from fellow IELTS aspirants:

The line graph illustrates the average number of children born to one woman between 1920 and 2019. The table below shows the average at which woman had their first motherhood in the same time frame as the graph which is 1920-2019. The common trend which can be seen in the graph is that more children were born to a woman in Kazakhstan than a woman in the UK while the table shows that a woman in Kazakhstan had motherhood at an early age compared to their UK counterparts.

Since 1920, there was an upward trend for both groups until 1960 wherein women in Kazakhstan gave birth to around 4.5 children and around 2.7 in the UK. Post that, we see a consistent decline until the late 2000s with a small uptick for Kazakhstan in 2019.

Furthermore, from the table, it is visible that the women in Kazakhstan gave birth to their first child earlier by 1-3 years compared to the woman in the UK. In the year 2019, both groups saw the age for their first motherhood peak with the women in Kazakhstan having their first child at the age of 27.6 and 28.9 the women in the UK.

[ayeshaahmad]

thanks asiya! i got overall 7 with writing= 7 as well as reading=7 by just viewing ur videos for 2 days before my exams as i couldnot do much prep coz of covid!

[thexd]

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AND I THINK IT WILL BE DEFINITELY WORTHY FOR ME

[Passengerberries]

I love your style of saying “let’s get started” I look forward to see more videos of yours for this line especially.
I have given my academic test, checked most of your videos and strategies for different tests and used it too. Hopefully, I should get good results, fingers crossed!! Thank you.

[qusaielayan]

I don’t know if it was just me but this one was very difficult to manage and make it at a reasonable length

[sajeethnihethanvetrivendha]

Pray for me I watched two videos and figured out her name is Asiya not sasiya 😅

[jonyjony]

Glad to describe it spontaneously. You just feed by hand .

[stellar]

Dear Asyia, I’m a fan of your videos and I thank you so much for all the free material you provide!
Last month I tried the Ielts Academic, unfortunately I didn’t get the result I was hoping: my writing was marked 6, 5 (I needed at least a band 7 in every part) and I will need to retake the exam.
I was a little surprised by writing task 1: 2 maps to compare. I did my best implementing the usual structure but I think this affected my performance and I missed the required band for just half a mark.
Would you be so kind to show us a sample answer for this type of task? I would be so grateful to you!
Have a wonderful day!! Stella

[darshacharya]

Hello maam, greetings,
Can you plz make a video on how to generate ideas for writing task 2. I would appreciate plz plz plz maam

[Chaudhary_N]

I love it when you say.. Let get started 🤑

[blessingakintola]

Am shocked I got a 9.0 in speaking 🔊 thanks a lot 🙏

[Overlord_Ral]

Hi Asiya,
I had a question, in graphs like these, contextually speaking, can they be in decimals? Like 1.8 children? 2.7 children? or should we say almost 2 and almost 3?

[i_am_mcsaint]

HI Asiya, I have been using some of your tutorials for IELTS preparation. I have an exam on 12 Feb and I am praying that I am going to pass...thank you for your videos, they are helping me a lot.

[farhatrehman]

😍 Loved the excellent video with a slow, clear and perfect pronunciation.