the self-insert protagonist you wrote in high school

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I'm giving it like 12 chapters at most before Captain Jane Captain gets brutally murdered to advance the protagonists character development.

soualexander
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"Once upon a time in a kingdom, there ruled a king who had the exact same morals and political views as me, and everyone loved him and nothing went wrong."

SwedishmafiaMemeCorporation
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So much sexual tension in this scene, absolute masterpiece of a book 10/10

lukejones
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Needs more adjectives. Instead of “he thought” try “he thought flirtatiously”

e.keough
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Every main character in a story I wrote for school was an idealized version of myself, the main character of everything I wrote for fun now is a slightly less idealized version of myself

journeytotheotherside
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In the next chapter, Jack Detective meets his long lost evil brother, Evil Jack Detective, who has telekinesis and a leather jacket

frito
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As a 17 year old who is currently writing on his first novel, this video was very helpful to my self esteem.

deraldiweihnachtskalender
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Never before have I been more offended by something I 100% agree with

SearaChar
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The most accurate part is the terrible attempt at de-Sueifying them.

When I was a kid I used to write myself as the super smart mentor who was “pretty in a normal way” and had flaws like “caring too much about animals” 😭💀

anerrorhasoccurred
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My self-insert dies in every play I’ve ever written. As my therapist says, “There’s something there, but we’re out of time.”

SamanDroid
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Frankly this screenplay is too original, have you considered adding a love triangle?

petar
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As a long-armed, long-legged model, it's refreshing to see an accurate depiction of our profession.

sacciuchi
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the haters don't understand, the really thick abs and arms are *very* important to the plot and structure

jxomxo
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Masterful use of subtext to show our protag's inner conflict of his use of sorcery and his love of reason. He really is the best detective.

Severian
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It's good to see the Skillshare writing courses finally paying off in this Carrying Endgame

sebisoymus
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For almost every story I wrote in elementary school, the main character was named after myself. It was just a coincidence, though. Not like it was a purposeful self-insert thing.

genericallyentertaining
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Those adverbs are superbly effective, nice and vividly am I picturing this lively interaction between Jack and the long-armed, long-legged model with the face of such a person.

nedved
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When he said "reasons" I cried. It's so relatable because I've had times when I've done things too and because I did those things for reasons I feel like it really speaks to my experience.

beatrixwickson
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I appreciate the way these adult characters flirt exactly like awkward teenagers

TheSongwritingCat
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When I was 10 I wrote a self-inserted Pokemon story and made it the most badass adventure I could think of. It was peak escapism.

evelynstenberg