Need a Band 9 in IELTS Writing?

[jasmeetkaurkukreja]

I think what am I scared for the most is writing because it's been two years since I did English

[kasiitadiriisa]

Hi Chris, which application did you use to create this amazing video ?

[КасиетТолтебаева]

can we get band 7 wirh simple words and grammar?

[КасиетТолтебаева]

can we get band 7 with simple words and grammar? is it necessary to use advance words?

[manvitdhanda]

Is opinion and example are essential for every essay ??

[salmanlakho]

I have very bad hand writing 😢 what should i do

[yob_dab]

sir plz evaluate my writing and give me band
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question prompt

Some people think that climate change could have a negative effect on business. Other people think that climate change could create more business opportunities. Discuss both views give your own opinion.


my answer population, pollution and many other things are changing the climate. Number of people believe that changing of climate can effect negatively on business whereas other think that, it can establish more chances to grow business. In this essay I will discuss both views and give my opinion.

To commence with, nowadays many people do their business to earn money and to gain profit as well as. Because of the climate Changing people who are doing business by selling fruits or vegetables can effected. According to many people climate change could have negative effect on business it can also effect in environment and can alter the habitants of various animals which can affect their life as well as the human health. For instance, if a fruit ripe in cold weather or in winter season If the climate changes it can cause an effect the fruit will not ripe on the season and change the human tastes.

On the other hand, people says it can open many businesses opportunities. Changing on climate can bring new habitants to animals and creatures and the sellers of fruits can sell various fruits in off-season and can increase the price of their products and can increase the price of their products and could earn more profit than before. To examplify, if in summer season farmers grow potato, if climate changes they can grow potato also in winter season because of climate change.

In conclusion, although people think that climate change bring business opportunity, I'm oppose it. Even if it can bring chances to growing up the business opportunity, it can also effect the environment and habitants. Nevertheless, it is dangerous to our world.