Ivy League Student REACTS to Devi's College Essay

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I am an overachiever... and so is Devi Vishwakumar, from Netflix's series NEVER HAVE I EVER. Her dream school is Princeton, and she makes a couple of mistakes trying to get there. I break down what you should and shouldn't do in your own college application journeys in this video!

Are we #teampaxton or #teamben ???

OVERVIEW:
00:00 - intro
1:20 - DON'T DO THIS AND WHY (ivy leagues)
3:23 - what Devi does and why
4:16 - Devi's essay
5:15 - is it successful and why?
5:43 - types of waitlist supplemental essays / letters of interest
7:00 - what Devi's Princeton rep said about her comm app (aka why it might've been unsuccessful)
7:23 - DON'T DO THIS AND WHY pt. 2 (big words)
9:10 - why is Devi's supplement effective?
9:27 - how I'd improve her essay
11:38 - when you write about another person... keep this in mind!
12:27 - origin of Princeton love
13:20 - my unsubmitted Rice essay
14:30 - CELEBRATION ANNOUNCEMENT! i'll be revealing my _____ essay....

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Artist : Morrie
Tittle : One Fine Day
Album : 당신이 행복하다면, 이 음악은 듣지 마세요.
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Another reason why Devi could have gotten off the waitlist was that Fabiola chose to give up her accepted spot to attend Howard instead.

jonathancheng
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When the notification popped up i jump into this

mahasinali
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sell death to get imho. "Trauma essay"!

shadowmt
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Could I send you my essay for you to give me feed back ?

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