My Designs Were AMATEUR Before Learning These!

Can I make these graphic designs BETTER!? In todays 'before and after' video, I take a deep dive into 2 designs where I dismantle them, make changes, and try to improve their quality.
This series on my channel has been one of the best successes and most well received. You the audience really seem to enjoy seeing my design process, and if I can in fact make the designs better with some tweaks here and there.

For this specific before and after graphic design video, I have only chosen to work on 2 designs. In the past, I have worked on more than 2 in a single video, but this time around I wanted to pay more attention and show more detail on each example.
Out of the bottled water design and the music events poster, I'm not sure which one I prefer after my designs were complete. However, I do like them both and feel they were a success. But what do you guys think? Were my graphic design changes decent enough, and did I improve the existing designs with some before and after touches?

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[SatoriGraphics]

Video Notes:
Design 1. I knew when designing the first example that the scale of the decking and water bottles were not realistic. I could have found a new image of decking but I ended up running out of time. I could also have scaled down the size of the bottles, but then they would be too small for the image considering they are meant to be one of the focal points of the design. Also yes, they should have more transparency. If I had more time and could go back into the design again, I would work in some transparency in Photoshop.

Design 2. The stripes are actually on the original poster, but they are merely just stripes. I decided to increase the scale of the models face using the mask, which leads into that 'change' and sense of 'revolution.' The idea of this video is to show people who are interested in learning about psychology and concepts within a design, and how they can play into the final solution

[Cyanide]

I loved the 2nd redesign much better than 1st redesign, in 1st redesign I think the text and the background needs more contrast, otherwise everything is good 👍

[raw_dah]

Thanks, I'm starting out in design as a beginner. All your videos are really helpful.

[parthasarathimishra]

I liked the second one more interesting. Had the mask not been there and had the Revolution not been in the middle, the design wouldn't have been so effective.

[Mizko]

Loved the Revolution design. The bands really solidified the concept of a revolution and movement!

[lukasgruber]

2nd looks great but having the date and DJ name so small does not work well as an advertising for an event. the main function of the ad is telling potential audience when you can see what dj (who is the main reason assuming its a household name to attend especially this event) and this is easily overlooked. it might work well for a booze event but the design hints to a classy clubbing.

[WassupItsDev]

The redesigns were awesome, love how much you know about designing, as a graphic design student and amateur designer (on and off for about 7 years - started in hs and worked in yearbook and after school just did lots of art, took 3 years off to pursue other interests), you sound so much like all my teachers and just love your work overall- inspires me to continue to learn more and more as well as design a lot more :)

[Igor-zwvp]

Redesign of the second one is so much better.

[aleliisidro]

Im a marketing student. Before college, I do edits for fun (fan made kpop poster, wattpad covers, blog covers in amino and such) what took me some time to figure out were always mentioned in your short videos. This would totally be helpful especially those who are just starting💕💕

[EdwardSeeber]

The glow up u gave the 2nd design was def needed 🌟💯 the use of typography was way nicely on my eyes to see here then the original

[ptuso]

Love this style of content, thank you!

For the second design, I think your version could be more functional with the event date higher in the design hierarchy, maybe to be placed under the event title? It seems like information too important to be included so tiny and at the very bottom.

I'm only a beginner - thoughts?

[Bro-qrfz]

I’m learning new from every new video from you thanks alot you save my days ❤️ love from India 🇮🇳

[zahrasky]

honestly i am really happy to find a teacher like you

[ahmadmuhdi]

Yeaaahhh this awaited series is back...
Thank You...

[youssefibrahim]

I love this kind of videos it still amazes me when i see how can a design change just through typography and layout and a sense of hireachy thanks satori always learning us new things

[jaydiptalaviya]

I cannot express my feeling here in words how good all your designs are, I am addicted to see your work

[FuzailShaikh]

This is the best format for design inspiration and gain deep insights in the process

[aftergameplayedits]

Thanks for your always smooth guidence ☺️😊

[pranaynaitam]

Second one that's strip have deep meaning 🤘🔥🔥 😎 thanks for that

[tulp_graphics]

I love watching this. I'm only just beginning my career as a graphic designer (career switching) and I can learn a lot from watching how other designers approach this. Thanks for sharing!