Advantages & Disadvantages essay IELTS Writing Task 2

In this video recorded by Ross IELTS Academy, we check out a Writing Task2 essay written by one of our candidates and see why he got the band score of 5.0, and give you some useful tips on how to get a good score when writing an advantage and disadvantage essay.

Before doing that, remember 4 important things when you practicing the IELTS writing:
1. Paraphrase the question statement in the introduction paragraph
2. Plan the whole essay in the introduction paragraph
3. Go into detail of the advantages and disadvantages in the body paragraphs
4. Conclude the whole essay in the conclusion paragraph

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[mdjalalahmed]

It was an incredible video as well as effective. Please make video about cause and effect type of task 2 question. I am from Sylhet ❤️ Bangladesh

[arezoomirseifi]

It was fabulous.please make more videos like this. But the paper was so small and i couldn't watch it clearly .please make it wider if its possible.

[kavyasharma]

Please make more video's for writing problems

[oszlea]

I love your videos! I just have one question, in this type of essay, should I name only one advantage and one disadvantage or should there be more? For example, should I name two of the advantages in the first body paragraph with the structure of the topic sentence, afterwards the first beneficial point of this side is... and an explanation plus example for that, and also then name the second advantage with the same structure; the second beneficial point/the second advantage and different explanation and example for the second advantage as well? And of course, the same thing in the second body paragraph but with disadvantages.

[mercymagava]

Is it wrong to write advantages in their own paragraph then move to the next paragraph of disadvantages, then say your opinion at the conclusion part

[eslamelshamy]

Should we speak about the advantages in a paragragh, and the disadvanatages in the other paragragh ?

[fakhrulalam]

I've problem in paraphrasing, what should I do for it🥺

[hafsamohamad]

Hi Ross IELTS Academy
I have registered to a mock speaking test and I payed the fees but there is no information about the appointment of the test or any thing else.
Will you send me it to my email or in my profile on the web and When?
thanks alot