IELTS Writing Task 2: Advantage/disadvantage essay | Taking risks | Cambridge 17

In this episode, I wrote a model for another advantage/disadvantage essay from IELTS Academic 17, focusing on the topic of risk-taking. Stay tuned for more essays and analyses to enhance your IELTS writing skills.

⌚ TIMESTAMPS
0:00 Understand the statement and instruction
0:37 Decide
1:41 Paraphrase the statement
2:06 Introduction
2:33 Body paragraph 1
3:33 Body paragraph 2
4:11 Body paragraph 3
5:02 Conclusion
5:56 Organization
6:26 Cohesion and coherence
6:33 Collocations and useful phrases

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[ranjanachataut]

Thank you so much from my heart because you followed the actual standards

[JanofsIELTS]

It is an amazing way of writing you have showed, i have a question regarding to conclusion, do you think it is too long for conclusion part? Or it is okay?

[sabazia]

kindly share the advantages and disadvantages essay in which question ask discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

[mohammadbroomand]

Thank you, sir. This video helped me a lot.

[ummeasalmahossain]

Is it Ok to write five paragraphs? In addition, when I already disagree with the statement, is it appropriate to add an agreed statement?

[yetunderachael]

Is it okay to have more than 4 paragraphs?

[doctormako]

ChatGPT gave this essay a band score of 7.