Do you make these 7 common mistakes in ielts writing task 1❓

In this video, we talk about the 7 most common mistakes students make in IELTS Writing Task 1.

Here are the graphs and charts used in this video:
🗒️ Cambridge IELTS 17 Test 4 Writing Task 1
The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

🗒️ Cambridge IELTS 12 Test 7 Writing Task 1
The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

🗒️ Cambridge IELTS 8 Test 4 Writing Task 1
The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

🗒️ Cambridge IELTS 5 Test 1 Writing Task 1
The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

🗒️ Cambridge IELTS 7 Test 2 Writing Task 1
The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

🗒️ Cambridge IELTS 9 Test 3 Writing Task 1
The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

🗒️ Cambridge IELTS 5 Test 4 Writing Task 1
The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

🗒️ Cambridge IELTS 16 Test 1 Writing Task 1
The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

🗒️ Cambridge IELTS 12 Test 5 Writing Task 1
The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

🗒️ Cambridge IELTS 14 Test 1 Writing Task 1
The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

🗒️ Cambridge IELTS 11 Test 2 Writing Task 1
The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

🗒️ Cambridge IELTS 10 Test 3 Writing Task 1
The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

▬ Contents of this video ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬

0:00 fluctuate
04:53 percent vs percentage points
06:52 among vs of
11:17 definite article with uncountable nouns
12:52 number vs numbers
14:45 highest vs the highest
16:38 paraphrase
20:11 recap

[gscpiuf]

Hi Lilie, Similarly to the previous commenter, I found your videos the most helpful, and used them a lot to improve my writing skills when preparing for my IELTS exam recently. The breakdown of the different types of writing tasks was relevant, clear, well explained, and full-round informative covering all the tiny details that can trip up a score. I was most worried about the academic writing task and I am pleased to say that I achieved 7.5 score - I am really happy with the outcome. Thank you. :)

[minus.arts]

Thank you Lilie! Your explanation really give me epiphany on understanding how to compare data on writing task 1. I’m looking forward to watch another tips from you!

[englishcamford]

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[gauravmahey]

It was very helpful, I got to know about a new term 'Percentage Points'. Thank you very much ❤

[vyvy]

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