OET Speaking Vitamin C deficiency or scury

In this video , we are explaining in detail about

OET SPEAKING ROLEPLAY VITAMIN C DEFICIENCY OR SCURVY.

Task
SETTING: Office room of School Nurse

NURSE:
You are school nurse. Ken, a 15-year-old teenager boy who is visiting you regarding the bruises on your legs and red spots all over the body.

TASKS:
• Ask whether he had visited the doctor for his condition
• Explain the effects of scurvy.(bleeding gums, bruise easily)
• Emphasize the importance of vitamin C in the body
• Encourage the patient to take veg-vegetables and fruits.
• Ask him to come for a review in one week

[Melon-si]

Very useful video.. Thank you so much sir..

[reejatittu]

Sir could you tell we need to put comma before who
Iam writing to refer MrX who requires ongoing care.