Object Show Tips: Part 2 - Writing (with WebzForevz)

It's been a while... in part two of Object Show Tips, myself and WebzForevz will teach you the basics of how to start writing, and many bad tropes you should avoid! Just like last time, leave a comment below if you agree or disagree with anything myself or Webz said in this video. I'll respond! And remember, these are not facts you HAVE to follow, this is just what we think will help make your writing stronger.

SKIP TO A CERTAIN PART OF THE VIDEO:
00:44 How To Start
02:49 Reducing Long and Redundant Dialogue
06:36 Giant Plot Lines?
08:54 Out-Of-Place Scenes

MUSIC CREDITS:
Owl City - Galaxies
Dua Lipa - Cool
Spyro: Reignited Trilogy - Midnight Mountain
Katy Perry - Tsunami
Paper Mario: The Thousand-Year Door - Poshley Heights
Clubhouse Games (Switch) - Billiards, Darts
MGMT - It's Working
Licensed under Creative Commons: By Attribution 3.0 License

[rachelrussell]

I never thought a chocolate bar would give me an english lesson

[WebzForevz]

Hello! I realize in hindsight, my part in this video might come off as a little "set in stone" in a few ways - meaning, I may have come off as though my way is the only 'right' way to write - I definitely think that, as a writer, I still have a long way to go myself, and so most of the things I said are just tips, and if I came across 'pushy', I apologize profusely. My goal was never to act as though my word is gospel, but only to give my advice, however, my language in this video ('never' 'always', etc.) seemed sometimes too exact, so again, I apologize. I hope you all liked it, though!

[coohoo]

i love how the "big plot lines" part seems like subtly making fun of object invasion

[zdoesstuffs]

“...which are sh-” “nOT VERY GOOD.”

I love this series so far and it and other object show creating videos have helped a ton!

[AnimationObjectShow]

Well, I've had 7 episodes of my show and I was pretty bad at writing. I think this will help me write a better show, and make it more interesting. Most of the things you said here make sense to me, and I think I can improve even after writing the 8th episode of my show. Thank you for making this, It really helps!

[DefinitelyAPerson]

For the writing of my show, I feel like I will be ok, my mother is a writer, she also reads over many books and edits them before they are published. My uncle is also a publisher. I’m glad my family is helping with this, cause they are all extremely talented

[APOYOSC]

Finally the second parts is out! I’ve been working on my own show for quite a while now so this helped a lot! Thanks!

[ThatLiyGuy]

I needed this. Thank you so much and I can’t wait to watch this :D
After watching: Okay, this video really helped. The redundant writing part really helps, and I didn’t even know it was a problem until now. I also liked the character build up part and the whole lot of this video! Thank you so much for this video, and I can’t wait to see the voice acting tips as I’m a voice actor myself 😃!

[blevination]

Someone should make an object show that intentionally breaks as many rules in this series as it can

[TheCatOfObjectShows]

I’m sure this will help several rising writers, including me. Thanks for this helpful video

[CaptainFroakie]

4:22 "ageless character"
Me: *laughs in Gelatin*

[JordanThene]

now i can write the best object show EVER!

[charliesdomain]

I am a big fan of this series. My show FTATBR even by joke show standards isnt too good and im sure other people could be in similar situations. Please continue!

[b.a.t.]

This is all really helpful advice for stories and writing in general, I'll definitely keep these different tips in mind when writing my own small stories!

[JacobFaircloughOfficial]

Object Show Tips is back and better than ever!

[miscellaneousrat]

6:15 This is actually a popular way to denote a joke in real life, and Clock talked like this in BFB 1.

[partycrashed]

Honestly, I’m planning on making an object show, and these have really helped me!

[CrappyProductionsOfficial]

personally i prefer storyboard because it can remind me what and how to animate that scene (i had a object show involving numbers but i later scrapped it because im too lazy animating [im using scratch to animate XD] and i hit puberty during the production of it and my voice changed so i couldn't recreate the original voice for the contestants anymore)

[Artificial_Deluxe]

Funny how I'm already making a new object show, so this is very helpful ! So 2 writters is pretty good imo

[moose]

This is really useful especially since im working on an object show with my friends