Rewrite (English Dub) - Fullmetal Alchemist OP 4

Okay, so I sang two versions of this. If you don't like how I sung this new version, check out the other one (I'll be putting links below...)

(Right-click to save these:)

Song: Rewrite
Orig.Artist: Asian Kung-Fu Generation
Anime: Fullmetal Alchemist (OP 4)
English Lyrics, Vocals: Zoozbuh

Lyrics===========

The reason why I wanna let all my deepest feelings out,
is because they're the reason why I'm even here at all.
I hold my future tightly, I see what's ahead of me.
I can choose to save my dignity, or to be truly free.

The reason why I rid myself of these pointless memories,
is because I feel limited by the hold they have on me.
You're staring at me through the window and I'm uncomfortable..
It's as stupid as a calendar with no dates at all.

I will rewrite it all!
I will live out all my dreams, there is no need for fantasy!

Yeah I will rewrite it well!!
Imagination helps you to stay alive,
and so you must give me your all.

Your body, and your soul.
Then I will protect you.

[MikuChanify]

Wow, these are great lyrics!! Your voice is so soft at first, and then so powerful...it's very nice.

[mnifl]

Checked out your channel cause of this. 2 years later, you're craft is really tightened up. Good show, mate

[coolbrujah]

AWESOME i have a hard time getting the words to link in english but you hit it perfectly

[xildy]

I remember I once sang geeky's lyrics, I wanna sing yours now! > w <
I LOVE this new upload! I especially like how you belted out the chorus part. xD

[kaitlynloveskidraul]

Nice! Keep singing! =) I love this song no matter what language its in

[potterdog]

i saw both of the links in your disription and lined them up perfectly and it sounded beautyful, ... let alone how good they sound alone=) (i suck at spelling ;) )
(>'.')> ghostie want

[slimsketchum]

Dude. You sound so cool!!!
*Subscribes right away*

[KingCPro]

Bro, this is good, man! Keep it up! 😀👌🏿

[bloodcycleOZero]

i always like ur dubbed songs. They are cool.

[shadowshows]

omg, this kinda sounds like me!!! this is sooo inspirational!!

[ravenbleach]

good singing i like how your like yeah i`m sininging at first then you get into it

[lightningpelt]

My anime/manga club used this as the example of a perfect fandub. ^^ I believe it was the correct choice. :D
=^^=

[plantsvszombies]

love this anime, and this song, but is there any English version of the full song?? 

[InsertGames]

Great job but I don't know If I missed where you said they weren't but some of the lyrics are not correct. Don't get my wrong this sounds REALLY good but its not the right words but again good job.

[clbjump]

This is amazing! The download links don't seem to be working though...

[Bloodxalchemist]

hey the link is not working could repost those links i would really like to download this its one of the best ive ever heard

[BakingBluePotatoe]

I like it! but it seems the links are broken!

[bella]

Can i use your lyrics? I'd really like to try to sing this myself :) though i don't think i'd be as good as you. I've been listening to this song for months but haven't gotten the guts to try and sing it yet. (And by that i mean your fandub)

[BlackWing]

nice cover! but is there any better quality than this?

[gerozeal]

Both download links say Failed no file.
What do now?