I didn't have a spike. Here's the essay that Stanford admission officers LOVED | College Lead

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🕒 TIMESTAMPS
0:00 - Introduction
1:55 - why I wrote a mosaic essay and my story
10:35 - advice on writing the mosaic essay
15:48 - not forcing the metaphor
18:40 - ending
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this actually gave me so much more hope. college applications are so stressful, especially for international students and this just made me realise i dont HAVE TO portray myself as this overachiever if i dont want to portray myself that way

rujhanzaynab
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Wow. Seeing everyone's extended metaphors and single-foci essays, I was under the impression that this was the key to a great essay. This opened my eyes.

manasj
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Thank you for introducing the one major I want in life right now. (even if it’s only available in the hardest college to get into)

dee
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I am literally a mosaic LMAO, but I wrote my essay based on how I can engage with different types of people. But this vid has changed my perspective bc I have more pieces of diverse stuff in my life

angelinavezet
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This is SO helpful!! Thank you so much for this!

ismaaeel
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I wish i had watched this before application season

yiyiluan
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Can you please share this essay ?
The structure of the essay is very hard to understand. I was already trying to write something like this but finding so hard to tie it together. Looking for flow in the essay,

singhinderjitsingh
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Loved your video! Do you think it would be good though if she could share her ecs and stats with us just to get an idea of what helped out in her application. Thankyou!!

iiyqjnq
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it is all great but the absence of the essay itself cutts like of usability, unfortunately. cause her essay Acustek sounds interesting

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