English Language Paper 1, Question 2: Securing 8/8

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[funytgirl]

is there any way that you can give me any feed back on mine? My first paragraph out pf 4? The writer uses language to present a hyena as horrid, looking and scruffy. "Coarse coat is a bungled mix of colours." This noun phrase gives us an idea of what the hyena looked like and the use of the adjective "bungled" highlights how ridiculous and careless the colours were, almost as if they were plotted on carelessly, giving it a "bungled" look, the use of a simile "none of the classy ostentation of a leopard", shows us that compared to another type of cat, the hyena is incomparable.

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[baimo]

Do the pretzel paragraphs have to be detailed or basic in terms of completing each of the letters

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[komalkaram]

what is the PRETZEL structure? as in what does it stand for

[saheer]

"room is spacious, COLORFUL, BLACK"????whaaaa

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[AYM]

How can a room be colourful and black at the same time?

[itzdhruv]

I’m redoing language I hope I pass it’s just the wordings that confuses me especially when the extracts are hard to understand

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When we zoom in, do we have to zoom in on a single word or can we do a phrase aswell?

[TheRedDevil]

Should you not always talk about Imagery on this question?

[adamaj]

I hope someone replies to this comment but it the pretzel method for 1 paragraph or is it split into two for 2 paragraphs?

[Ali-krh]

How about if i used only one PRETZEL paragraph sir.

[DylanBrar]

"When books were golden, when imagination soared, when the world was filled with stories which is that rule of three too?