IELTS Live - Task 2 Writing - Start for Band 9

IELTS Task 2 Writing
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Many people spend a large amount of money on celebrating birthdays and weddings. Discuss the views and opinions of this trend.
Write at least 250 words.

[raniabelkheir]

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[beksultanomirzak]

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[sbacademy]

I have one question regarding that. It is appropriate to write our brainstorming ideas into body paragraphs instead of writing in the introductory paragraph. What I write in the introductory is that,
Before giving opinion regarding on this, both the statements (spending expensive money on birthday and wedding) will examine in the subsequent paragraphs.

Is this correct or better to write ideas in the thesis?

[jorenadias]

I wanted to add my answer to what is an expensive wedding or birthday
Spending money more than one’s budget or is capable of earring. Some people might save money while others might end up with a debt.

[harpindersingh]

Hlo sir are contrictions allowed ?? As family 's in the thesis statement