Updated Question 4 Paper 1 Walk Through AQA Mr Salles

What do you write in four paragraphs? What skills do you need? See Timestamps:
0:00 Introduction
0:35 Question Tactics
1:58 Understand the Mark Scheme
2:30 How to Revise
3:23 Question Timings
3:38 What does the question mean?
5:03 Live Model Answer Start
7:37 Three Writing Skills
8:58 Live Model Answer middle and end
16:35 Write an evaluative introduction
19:18 Where to find the AQA resources in this video

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Thank you Mr Salles, you have given me a perfect strategy to answer this tricky question. I just wanted to ask if you can include language/structural analysis in this question and if that could bump up your mark as for example I notice you don't focus on metaphors or any other technique in your answer.

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mr sales just a quick comment at 9:40 u were examing the top part when it says lines 25 till the end, so instead of seeing when his reaction was extreme u should check the lines because say if mr fisher reaction was extreme in the early lines u wouldnt get any marks, and potentially cutting into question 5

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Mr Salles could you make a video on how to cheat the descriptive writing piece, for descriptions about people that can be integrated into our answers?

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Also, I highly recommend everyone to use " not only does the writer This sentence is very helpful.

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Sir, Why is there not much analysis of techniques and effect

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Great video, how would you include structure in question 4 (etc. could you put punctuation or short sentences?)

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