heat death - (music)

another music project i did in my spare time, the art was made a fairly long time ago but touched up on recently to use it as the 'cover' for this one since the music was made with that piece in mind. way more going on than the last one, but i think its neat. i got other things i would post in bulk but i don't have any cover art for them, so i might just throw something together whenever I get some free time between animating and classes

added chapters to get into the meat of it since the soundscape bit goes on for a little longer than intended
0:00 - 0:21 soundscape bit
0:22 - 3:51 the actual music

[gabew]

I can just imagine what this would be used in. A Gorgeous landscape with rolling hills decorated by monuments of faith and wealth, But it's tearing itself apart. Gouts of flame erupt out of Massive cracks in the earth. The sky turns an ominous red as loose chunks of terrain start to float toward the heavens.

[blackh]

Some parts of the song are surprisingly warm/comforting sounding for something as threatening as heat death.
Either way, this goes hard. Keep it up!

[meekaboo_]

Loving the music and ambience stuff. Very lovely!

[mold]

Love the subtle use of what sounds like a choir in the background

[JustBizmuth]

ok this is actually really good and has already made it's way into my music playlist
but
i want to give some criticism (that i am VERY unqualified to make, mind you) since just saying it's good and going on with my day won't really help you much to improve
i think the first part after 0:22 is really good since it kept most of the focus on one instrument, while later on (example 2:25) every instrument felt like it's fighting for the attention of the listener (which, i assume, isn't what you want). sort of feels like a really well made drawing that was made only using the airbrush tool, making it appear foggy in the process, if that makes sense.
now to HOW you fix this? ashamed to say i'm not sure. again, i'm no master, just telling you observations i made that i hope can help you

[giornogiovanna]

Cruelty squad type of beat but it doesn’t make you wanna puke
Good job!

[thisisanameyoudontlike]

Kinda Ultrakillish…


I wonder why🤔