Nemesis tryout

tryout animation to join a clan

[waypast_]

Attack on Titan music FOR THE WIN BRO!!!! LOL Nice! :D

[lordvader]

Awe I want to see Umbrella too in this tryout...:/
Oh well.

[Yunguy]

I really like the song choice! It was really intense and action packed!

Though some things concern me : Your lack of control in terms of wobble and "pack-a-punch" and your repetitive-looking combos and sword choreography. I'm not gonna lie, you really need to step up your game if you wanna stay the title of "legendary" or "old-school", since quite a lot of us look up to you as an old-school animator with the big guys. Your wobble hasn't been polished up and the force you give isn't enough. You need to put in more time and effort into making your frames more smooth and "liquid" like. I know you are a fast animator, yet your length and ridiculous movement can only compensate so much. If you're wanting to get into the bigger leagues above stick-figure animating, you need to be like Resh or Nordin. They are single-frame underdogs in my opinion and they are a great example to look at.

Now, your combos and sword choreography are... Unoriginal at this point. This also includes stepping and counters. They are basically the same as how they've been done in the past animations you've done. Even if you're doing the best you can to provide to us a sick-looking animation, you need to do some DIFFERENT. Think of new fresh combos that look the same, but think of new ways to execute them. There are arms flailing, legs going in hops and jumps, crouches and bends, etc. It all looks the same! Try to experiment more through what you can do and what you can think.

I'm sorry if I am very blunt or rude. But, it's reality and the truth. I've been criticized and told through things rather bluntly, yet I accept it. I've been taught to accept it because it is what gets me to become a better animator. So, I hope you take this into practice and become a better artist.

- Lucas D. Yun

[PabloPalacpac]

1 year later he became a member of Nemesis :)

[NothingsNoiseChannel]

AWESOME WORK! Love the BGM btw, it's from Attack on Titan right? Either way it's awesome

[shizukorosektk]

love the video.

can someone tell me the name of the song???

[thunder]

Wait.. He just killed nemesis. How can he join a dead clan?