I Remade my FIRST Horror Game and it's Too Scary

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In this video I try to remake my first horror game, which was kind of a cool little idea, but honestly it turned out pretty bad. I tried to do it as quickly as possible because I am still working on another game (the grandma game) and want to try to get that out soon.

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Also I will fix the cars, idk why I made them so small lmao

[Qwadra]

Instead of sending you back to the title screen after a cheap jumpscare, you could follow with a static effect that glitches out, causing you to open your eyes and appear at the hospital again (but every time after your first the entity won’t be in the hospital.)

[qhoulbow]

In my opinion, walking out of the hospital room and directly into the roads is way better. It really makes you think "did I just teleport or did I take way too much of that Wipell?". Bonus points if the room disappeared after you walked out of it.

[Chameleon_]

Instead of the jumpscare killing you, it would be sick if the shadow guy popped up in your face causing you to fall backwards, crawl backwards away from him, whip your head to the side and have a car hit you since the shadow man is meant to be just a hallucination and not a real physical entity.

[carnivorousbeast]

I actually jumped back when the jumpscare popped! Even when I knew what was comming. Congrats man and keep it up with the hard work!

[Slimerror]

How about for the name of the the game you call it Crossing over? You could even have later doctor logs document you (the patient) having hallucinations and lashing out at caretakers before gameending in your sleep!

You could also have THE MAN (truly scary name btw, like strikes fear deep down into my throat) be the hallucinated mess of a loved one who would visit you in your final months on earth. If you go that route you should make the ending bittersweet with some nice little cutscene where the day before you pass its really calm and you have no fits and get to experience the somber visit of that loved one.

Having these cutscenes in the game springled throughout after collecting pages could really draw out a lovely story for the game.

[RowanBreen]

Call the Psychosis Road
Psychosis is losing touch with external reality and when the literal boogie man is walking after you on a high way, that is the first sign of insanity

[ooixiqing]

my suggestions:
-Small car, are we secretly giants?
-Foggy (make the place a bit more foggy, i acctually liked how the first one actually feels, the car come very fast and with foggy surrounding make it even scarier, a taller trees too, make us seem small, add to the hallucination)
-cutscene (i like it, but u could maybe make 'The Man' walking weirdly like walking but like when u accidently trip on a stone but u catch urself before u can fall down)
-sound effects (since were running, adding breathing sound effects would be a bonus point)
-PARTICALSSS (it snowy, so add like where u breath and those gas thingie come out each breath u take!)
-Logs (either on some of the trees, or on the ground, somehow erm outside the hospital)
-CARSS LIGHTSSS (while it look good, i feel like it should also go outward, dunno)
game name:"CrossRoad of Reality" (GOD IT SO BAD BUT I CAN'T THINK OF A BETTER ONE, since it have crossroad, and it related to hallucination...yeah)

[marymora]

8:19 A suggestion:That the menu is like a A notepad that doctors use to write down symptoms And that when you press one of the buttons they change The pages

[deniz_istanbul_love]

I love it when YouTubers acknowledge their accidental misinformative content and poke fun at it. Respect bro it was hilarious 😭

[salma.elk]

9:19 that genuinely scared the soul out of me, i didn't see it coming😭😭

[rishikamishra]

The jump scare actually scared me so bad, i physically recoiled back even though i knew it was coming. U r such a great developer, i love ur content<3 Eagerly waiting for part 2 of previous game!

[E-arli]

My suggestion:
-When The "hallucination" getting closer a "run" text will be fading in with more intense music
-Bruh, the car is 2 small

[MrHimothy]

9:25 How the hell did I get jumpscared 😢

[Ethan-ydgn]

Everyone is giving their critiques and game ideas, which is totally chill and all, but this is unironically just a really well made video, props to you for not only MAKING the game, but being able to document it and edit it as good as you have

[ec]

Honestly you should delete the whole hospital. It makes much more sense that, while hallucinating, you just randomly exit a hospital room into the middle of nowhere.

[doctro]

Bro.
The jumpscare got me to actually shake so hard.
Well done!

[NickFibonacciCristea]

A couple suggestions:

1. The hospital corridor is unusually dim, add some ceiling lights.

2. Add tunnels or anything to give out the appearance cars are not appearing out of thin air.

3. Angle the syringe about 45 degrees.

[Tryxol_Kotonix]

7:49 WHAT HAVE YOU DONE that image is now burned into my head

[enlightenedlightening]

I feel like the main tweak is a bit more terrain for a better transition from the hospital to the roads (like there isn't even a parking lot lmao).

Also the entity could be a bit more glitchy when chasing you. Still absolutely oove the project.