Super Sentence Stacking with Jane Considine - The Present - Writing Lesson

Welcome to Jane Considine's Super Sentence Stacking. Today we will be using the short film The Present as inspiration for our Super Sentence Stacking.

Choose Your Chunk plot points

Plot point 1: The Box
Time: 0:06 – 0:30
Plot point 2: Daylight
Time: 0:30 – 0:47
Plot point 3: Surprise!
Time: 0:47 - 100
Plot point 4: Rejection
Time: 1:01 – 1:20
Plot point 5: Spot the ball
Time: 1:21 – 1:44
Plot point 6: Boxes are fun!
Time: 1:45 – 2:15
Plot point 7: Balls are fun!
Time: 2:15 – 2:38
Plot point 8: Please play
Time: 2:39 – 3:00
Plot point 9: Friendship blossoms
Time: 3:01 - end

Download the Choose Your Chunk plot point map here

We’ve made the Super Sentence Stack entry form downloadable;

Of course, you can simply write your sentences on a piece of paper. Do not forget to add your name and age.

If you would like to submit your work, simply take a photo and Tweet via @janeconsidine using the hashtag #SuperSentenceStacking.

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[annelinewittstock]

Thank you Mrs .C you have thought me so much

[MM-xpcj]

Shouldn't the inner thought be in inverted commas? "Really", thought Jake, "not much of a dog with three legs!"