[Warrior Cat OCs] Divorce

Lord I hope the plot of this is comprehensible to anyone that isn't me. In case it isn't, here's everything that happens in it:

Bumblebite is on a revenge quest to kill Logbellow (drawn in the sand) who killed her brother (ghost who is judging her). After her mate Ashfang shares that his own brother Falconsky was killed by a rogue, she decides to tack on that rogue to her revenge quest, vowing to kill both brother killers.
She spends the next several moons tracking down the rogue, while Ashfang doesn't really help, lazing around camp and flirting with their mutual friend. This results in many public arguments.
Bumblebite is narrowing in on the rogue, and tries to get Ashfang to come with her to catch and kill him, but Ashfang declines. Bumblebite leaves on her own and catches the rogue, named Reed, and is about to kill him— only for him to confess in desperation that he didn't kill Falconsky, Ashfang did. He only helped Ashfang cover it up. Bumblebite rushes back to camp, pulls Ashfang out to somewhere private, and confronts him. They get into a physical fight, and Ashfang's fate is left uncertain at the end.

This is the biggest and most detailed video I've made to date!!! Theres lots of parts that arent perfect and it is messy and sketchy but good god I finished it. nearly 4 minutes of warrior cat pmv

Characters from Clans of the Valley roleplay! In order of appearance-
Cat w/ underbite drawn in sand - Logbellow (he/him)
Black & white ghost cat - Honeyhawk (he/him, Bumble's brother)
Black tabby w/ white on face - Ashfang (he/him)
Dead brown tabby - Falconsky (he/him, Ash's brother)
Grey tabby w/ purple eyes - Reed (he/him)
Grey & black cat w/ facial scar - Shrikewillow (he/him)

"Labour" by Paris Paloma
Drawn in Clip Studio Paint, edited together in Movie Studio 71.0 Platinum

[jaelyyymar]

I like how the affair partner cat isn’t like…objectively pretty. I see a lot of stories where the AP is this gorgeous, glowing epitome of grace, but the cat is…just a cat. They’re just another being like Bumble and Ash, who is also making the choice to get between two mates and flirt with a taken tom. I honestly like real depictions of cheating being an active choice over the story of “he/she was just too beautiful, her/his skin was like rose petals!” It just makes more of an impact in the end because it really does cement home it’s a constant decision, not just a one time social faux pas.

[AmphibianAnimations]

I loved at the end when they're fighting, you can see all the work she did for him, yet he never gave the same to her.

[foreverpainful]

sad tortoiseshell cats is my fav genre fr

[Felix-jonj]

the movement at the scene of 2:15 of turning around and running back to camp is SO good!!

[yiloisepiraya]

FROTHING AT THE MOUTH? biting this, devouring this, putting it in a blender and drinking it as a smoothie

[Anya.From.Mouthwashing]

So their mutual friend Ashfang was flirting with is a home wrecker. Those are the worst kinds of people. They knew of the relationship and didn’t care or put a stop to the flirting.

[lunimefox]

And the crowd... wheres the crowd?! No, but seriously, this is so good, I was at the edge of my (nonexistent, I'm laying on my bed) seat rooting for Bumblebite!

[Mr.CrawDaddyOfficial]

I do not get chills easily but OH MY GODDD THE CHILLLSS I GOT ON THE “all day everyday” AGGHHHH. THIS IS ABSOLUTELY GORGEOUS

[duckgami]

Absolutely BONKERS about this Kira, this came out so good and I can’t stop rewatching it. Love is LOSING !!!

[Stooartluv]

Wait why is this so good you are so underrated 😭

[PondWaterTea]

I didn't understand some of it first time I watched other then the mate kinda of hitting on the other cat. Then I read discription and rewatched. Loved it!

[stolenkiwi]

Kira I fear you absolutely ate with this one, my only regret is losing interest with Ash because they could have become so much more toxic. (and we love that for the plot)!!

[dawn]

BRO?? THE ART AND ANIMATION IN THE FIGHT SCENE IS ABSOLUTELY MIND-BLOWING HOLY HELL?? THE PERSPECTIVES ARE SO INSANELY GOOD OMG

[scrunk-mcfunk]

still absolutely insane about this. exploding you with my mind forever for all of your days

[MinkThePigeon]

I HAVE WATCHED THIS A LEAST 20 TIMES THIS IS A MASTERPIECE

[Cass-sfsr]

I HAVE NEVER SEEN YOU BEFORE BUT, I CAN ALREADY TELL YOU ARE BRILLIANT

[arkanamarkana]

This is SO GOOD!! The tweeting is fantastic, the framing is gorgeous and the storytelling is phenomenal! Very excited to see where Bumble’s story goes from here!

[foxedouts]

i hope you know i cant stop watchign this

[Carcassdraws]

YOUR STORYTELLING AND WORLDBUILDING IS ACTUALLY AMAZING

[Bioskye]

THIS IS ACTUALLY SUCH GREAT STORYTELLING