Mx Disney R2: James Hawkins (late/incomplete)

cheers to having one fo the worst depressive episodes of my life during round 2 of this contest, hahaaaa...

i know this won't count for points given its so late, but i wanted to put this up anyway as a means of giving context for next the round's video i guess? its got some important things in it (shrug)

enjoy my mediocrity i guess?

[Keyineii]

"I'll bury you in the sand myself"...THAT FORESHADOWING! Thanks for the assist, giant column! "Way down we go/we get what we deserve"...what a great song choice for this round too. I really feel for James here though, but I feel like Ishaan is the best possible person he could have in his corner. Also, him defending Ishaan ... 👌👌👌I like how he has a flashback to Ruber threatening him, seems like seeing him be shitty to his friend was really the last straw. Now there's a character with a well earned and very interesting vengeful streak. I hope things look up for him (and you) now though.

[scarletnoir]

It's unfortunate you weren't able to finish, but I'm glad you decided to post this, seeing as how it gives great insight into James’s internal turmoil. You definitely have a knack for adding tension into the endings of your rounds. I legit whispered “Oh fuck” the minute Ruber was mentioned underneath all the rubble. How is it possible that with mere words/dialogue you can create tension? XD You turned MD’s lackluster script for R2 (imo) into a compelling narrative for James. It’s great seeing his character progress and stand up for himself…and potentially kill someone lol. Just know that I overall I enjoyed your entry, and I hope you’re doing better.

[audreyspektor]

Great work with the storytelling and script! Loved the story development. I wanna know more about James' past! =)

[StarryEyed]

It's such a shame you weren't able to complete this round. Your story is so interesting! James definitely has a ruthless streak!