Why You Should NEVER Explore an Abandoned Hospital | Creepypasta

I love exploring abandoned places... Blackwood Hospital, though – that place was different...

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Author ➡️ Macabre Horror (I wrote this!)

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I'm a horror narrator and storyteller from Southern England.

My goal at Macabre Horror is to bring you the best and scariest creepypasta narrations; whether that is through Nosleep, the wiki, or my own original stories.

Some use my stories as an ASMR reading, whereas others use my scary stories to fall asleep to.

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Disclaimer: This creepy pasta story is for entertainment purposes only, and is narrated with full permission of the author.

[macabrehorrorYT]

I hope you enjoy this original horror story that you won't hear on any other channel!

If you did, please consider leaving a LIKE and a COMMENT 🖤 Thank you, as ever, for the amazing support

[Susumu]

Macabre, excellent story telling as always!

[marilynhands]

Exciting and creepy! Thank you so much. Keep up the great content. Love your voice😊😊😊👍

[anniereddj]

Particularly well done! Captured the tone and tenor of actual exploration videos with the addition of the horror they THINK they’re hoping to find. Thank you for the continued scares!!

[hugger]

Absolutely loved it!!! So spooky gave me the chills..lol 😳 Great job Mac! 👏 🌟💥🫶🖤

[elbaestridge]

Creepy! I listened while running, and I'm glad there is not abandoned places in my route. But, yes, while hiking, the hikers see some abandoned cabins, fallen roofs and broken windows and once we saw a rocking chair in the porch (spooky). Every time you notify us that it is an original, I know it will be good. This story is so creepy and terrifying, and the end makes this history more scary than the beginning. Keep uploading more. Thanks. 💙😯.

[daisychain]

Got me all creeped out lol. I do love your original work, you're so very talented. Thank you for all your hard work 💗

[halthammerzeit]

I actually was born in similar hospital. In 1980 it was in the process of moving to the new building. Original was built in 1869, for Johannites. Now it's almost collapsing in places, town's unwanted hole on the map.

[lsapetterson]

I Absolutely Luv These Stories 📚 I Also just Luv This guy's Voice, Honestly I Cud listen 2 him ALL Day n Nite!❤❤
Gr8 Story 2!
Perfect way 2 start n End the Day ❤🖤🌷🕊💯

[froginprogress]

It is absolutely pouring here where I am, and when I first started this, I heard the rain ambience and thought my gutter broke or something😂

[West_desert_casserole]

That thing scares him nearly to death and chases him around the hospital only to have the absolute GALL to ask him for help at the end. Some people! Er, cryptid demon alien thingies

[AmericanBulldog-kxfz]

Personally...I find old abandoned buildings and homes TERRIFYING!

[Divebomb_Dave]

Somebody should’ve went and helped that poor thing

[jenniferlonnes]

Terrifying!
Of course its called Blackwood.

[littlewhitedove]

Thanks for the upload ❤. Here’s a quick comment for the algorithm, hope it helps

[nancyallen]

You have a killer voice for creepypastas. Plus its very soothing at the same time, which makes it perfect for late night fall asleep listening. I just wanted to say...Well Done ! Creepy Easy Listening! Maybe you'll start your own genre. That would be cool. Ya think??

[JhadeSagrav]

Unwanted advice! Feel free to ignore!

The human brain is a consummate pattern seeker! Try adding a repeating motif into the story. For example, the "Help Me" here worked well at the end, but it leaves open the question of how/why the ghost could use the phone.

One possibility would be to add during the chase the words appearing on the wall in blood (ghost can manipulate the medium of its message), and then maybe over the non-functional hotel intercom (ghost can manipulate technology). That way, when we see it in the phone, we're primed to understand the logic behind it.

The other thing humans like is REASON! The why behind the things. The why after. This is why fairy tales all have morals.

What did they learn? Why did that matter?

To add that, you could have the narrator obsessed with the stories of abandoned asylums due to a morbid curiosity. Throughout the chase, the narrator could be subjected to reliving the ghosts experience while there. At the end, they could have decided to swear off on their obsession, not out of fear, but out of respect to the people there. They could have learned that these aren't just gruesome stories to read for fun, but actual lives not at all different from our own that were tormented and destroyed.

The final "Help me!" would resound much MUCH louder if that's what the narrator learned. Because the narrator would WANT to help, having experienced what the ghost did, but would now forever live with the despair of knowing there is nothing anyone can do.

Great story!! Sorry for adding my 2 cents.