How to write a Haiku

This short film explains the structure and style of a Haiku.

[sadiaramzan]

Haiku 1: (try 1)
Trees crave for water,
The desert is deserted
What will happen to the trees?

Haiku 2: (try 2)
Up in the sky, high
The peigons and birds fly
Watch out! A plane there!

Haiku 3: (try 3)
The gloomy night struck,
The gloomy shadows haunted me
Screamed wildly, fainted.

Haiku 4:
The cities flooded,
The water approaching,
Quick! Run to survive.

I know it's not good enough but I will try better next time, thanks for this video really helpful, it saved my life! 🙃

[dariuspetrusevicius]

Amazing video, the editing is wonderful, the voice acting is beautiful and will written. 420/10 for this one!

[sandhanitizer]

i love your poem aaaa you tell them soo good

[SAWYERKEARSE]

I couldnt even finish this liked and subscribed immediately!

[dylanb]

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[idongesitusen]

Your video on Limmericks helped me so much that I decided to write haikus. Thanks.

[bobbi-jeanrobertson]

My grade 6's love your videos. Keep them coming!

[kiararychvalsky]

This was a great and informative video, 10 out of 10, would recommend

[maccook]

Great quality and information as always. Keep up the good work Groobles Media

[lionking.]

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[imiho]

Hi. I loved this video! I actually dont really like poetry, but this video really got me going in the poetry world. 100010200201010/10!

[gurrapumanjari]

thank you for helping me about learning haiku poems
fabulous learning video

[ChicaneMedia]

As you said Haiku should be about nature but can I write about things I like?

[KuromiRebaixada]

my english teacher send this video to me (i'm braziliannn)

[meervi]

Deep in her burrow
Rabbit sleeps she dreams of spring
and tasty flowers

[shamsvip]

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[Nicktabla]

I know this is for kids, but English syllables and Japanese sound units (onji) are very different and not relatable. Most haiku poets writing in English do not write in the 5-7-5, as you mentioned. You also mentioned economy, though 5-7-5 in English can be two times longer in Japanese. Japanese 5-7-5 is closer to 3-5-3 in English. In Japanese, they even count punctuation as a syllable (kireji). So, to be traditional in English, we need to write shorter than 5-7-5 syllables.

[suzu.k]

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[hannahrehart]

Oh my aching back,
Might as well call workmen’s comp.
It’s thrown out again.

[toyr]

Why ddi my mom tell me to watch this i already know how to write one