REDESIGNING MY OLD MIDDLE SCHOOL OCS

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This was a lot of fun hope you enjoyed! let me know if yall want a part two!
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If you want to give Margot glasses but don't want to commit to it, you could always use the reading glasses angle. Like maybe she uses them as to not strain her eyes and prevent headaches when reading, but like she doesn't NEED them. ❤

vodkamutini
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I HOPE YOU END UP DOING MORE WITH THIS STORY!!! IT SOUNDS LIKE SO MUCH FUN!!

pistachiomi
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maybe you could have meme (short for memetic) being a exterdimensional menace or something, like he keeps popping up in each time period despite them not bringing him.

ianmailbox
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I like this, it reminds me of my old OCs!! 2016 was fun
Also maybe you could call the bunny Antic. That'd be kind of funny

nowayjose
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This is all good, love it. Maybe "Meme" is the catalyst for the time travel? Or like, his name is something ridiculously complicated and Jane just goes "You're Meme now."
Legit though love seeing old OCs getting rebooted, nice stuff! And I can vouch for the paper doll thing it works great!

catmaniacx
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The Margo and Emmet story is pretty typical middle school romance stuff - "what if there was an attractive person who was totally obsessed with me and really wanted to be with me?". There's a good reason for this - around middle school is where a lot of people start to get their first crushes, and have to deal with the "oh I like this person but I'm not sure if they like me back" feelings, which is an entirely new (and somewhat scary) thing! So a lot of people will imagine what it might be like to be on the other side of that, as it were.

And it's actually... not a bad thing to think about, in that situation! If someone was exactly my type, and told me they liked me, how would I feel? How would I react? What could they do to win me over? What does someone "exactly my type" even look like? Reading stories like that, or even trying to write your own, is a great way to figure out what you want from life going forward.

Sure, the original Newbie comic was kind of a blob of romance and drama because Young Emma hadn't learned about things like pacing, character growth or story arcs. It's only "bad" because of the author's inexperience, not because the subject matter is "cringy" in itself. :)

MeagenImage
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For some reason after you described Margo and Jane’s New personalities. My brain immediately went to opposites attract love story. 😂 They start out on afull footing at first not really getting each other, but then there put through that crazy situation with the time travel shenanigans were they have to rely on each other to get through it. As they slowly bond, and eventually fall in love. Idk why, my brain thought of this.😅 anyway Great redesigns,
👍🏻I love emmets glow up the most I’m a sucker for a pretty, old-fashioned, man. ❤

Corpsey.doesart
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I’m sorry but Jane and Margot would make such a great couple their designs compliment each other so well while being completely different 😭

rosypython
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when you said the bunny was an "agent of chaos" my mind instantly went to "interdimensional / magical chaotic being with a cute exterior" kind of character, like a cute bill cypher (maybe he'd be the antagonist ? or maybe he'd seem like the antagonist just for a worse character to show up ? i definitely think he'd be the source of the time travel book), as for the antagonist (if it's not the bunny) i think a sort of shapeshifting character taking the form of proeminent figures through time to change history would be interesting, the kind that doesn't have a "real appearance" but just constantly morphs into everyone and takes on their personality (could be very unsettling)

BABABABABANCHAN
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There is something so heartwarming about artist redesigning old OC.

saladcaesar
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Yes!!! More Oc content! Chomp!

If you were going to keep the rabbit as a agent of chaos that a college student is keeping as a pet I think changing the name to Mimi would be sort of fun. Or even if you don’t make it chaos based you could name it after something related to time (or maybe the rabbit from Alice in wonderland because “late for a very important date” and all that) just as like /foreshadowing/. Could be fun. Whatever you choose I’m super excited to see more content from you! Love your work

imnoorrs
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The Magic tree house style time travel method with the book idea sounds super fun

wyrmghost
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Meme is iconic as a name. Also love love love the new life your breathed into your OCs. It’s so hard looking back at what past you made. The reaction image of you slumped dead encapsulates that feeling perfectly.

hannahschmitt
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This is the type of love triangle I like! Not both into him, lol, it’s an “it was always you” type of thing which is awesome. Emmett and Jane slow burn yes please

Brittanysplittany
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I was thinking that Emmet being from the regency era makes his old “random XD” humor almost fit a bit better like he’s heard middle schoolers and adults trying to fit in with the kids saying things and he’s repeating it in an attempt to fit but he has zero context and so it always falls flat? Just a thought, anyways I’m subscribing because I love your art and you made me giggle a lot in this video and I’m excited to see more from you ^^

strawberrycandiez_
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What if Meme is a magical being that Margo "happened" to adopt one day (in reality the bunny orchestrated a bunch of events to happen just so that she would stumble into the adoption center and see him). He is also the one who gets Jane and Margo set up as study partners, and leads them to a magical book that he's planted for them. His plan is to either bring forth chaos from the past into the future, or to spring humanity's development farther forward for his own nefarious deeds..

liizs
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HELL YEA MAGIC TREEHOUSE CAMEO! The designs really bring out their characters and it seems like they’re have an interesting dynamic due to different eras!

MatthewSmith-ltrh
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keep the bunny, its totally old 2000s anime vibes. do it!!! maybe make him a part of the story.
I do love them honestly, I want to see Emmet learn what memes are and go like "Like me-me?" and be holding the bunny. it would be cute.
I love these guys!!!!

yukiandkanamekuran
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I always find it super fun when artists make videos redrawing their old OCs and artwork, hearing them talk about their mindset at the time, old ideas, scrapped ideas, etc. etc. I really would love to do this but a lot of my old artwork used to be at my grandpa's house. My mom threw away/gave away almost everything when he and we moved during mid - late 2020 and I only have my art both digitally and physically from 2019 and my school artwork from kindergarten and 1st grade. R.I.P. my old art

BYWHATECRAYNZ
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I have a little idea for he villain that goes hand in hand with Meme. You said that Meme was a chaotic character, right. Make him the cause of the time travel! I will leave the rest up to you

cloudy_skys