suitcase | one shot, short film

short one shot, film school assignment.
shot one shot under 2 min and allways keep on having motion in the frame.
Gear Used:
GH4
Samyang 12mm Cine
Beholder ds1

[goldmondfong]

it could not have been more lucky and perfect for those birds to fly across frame at the right time

[RodrigoMirra]

This is golden. The lights, the location, the camera moves, everything is perfect. However, I think you messed up with the ending!

[huntermoranville]

That was awesome! Seems like everything was timed perfectly. This seems like a great exercise to strengthen your cinematography and composition, definitely going to be giving this idea a go soon!

[AllThingsFilm]

Very cool short. What's interesting is that many so-called film makers complain about gimbal shots, saying they're too smooth, too robotic. Yet, this scene worked because of the smoothness. If this shot was completely handheld, the bouncing camera work would've been distracting and therefore taken the audience out of the moment, especially given that there was no dialogue to focus on. So, in my opinion, this scene worked well especially because of how it was shot. Great work.

[valleyfilmsuk]

Loved it, loved it, loved it. For the first time in a long time I actually appreciated the evident 'boat sway' up and down movement caused by the user, as it seemed to fit perfectly in the movement of the characters. Good job.

[ChrisPlaysGamesCPG]

This is a totally lovely film. Thank you for sharing it! Definitely one of my favorite indie one-shots.

[saltyyolk]

Oh! 😱 the wide-screen goodness, I can't resist myself.

[MadMusicLine]

the color crading is the real highlight! Awesome work. (and of course the birds and the timing :D)

[ammo]

Very, very well made! Color Grading is really good, framing is great, as well as camera movement. I have a few really tiny problems with the film, but overall I really enjoyed it! Id' give it a 9.1/10

[tgagsHD]

You did a really good job with this! I have an assignment like this due on Tuesday, but I have no idea what to do for it :/

[scottygrey]

this was very pleasing to watch. thank you.

[shalinputhiyottilshajy]

greetings from india. which cam you guys used?

[KhalilKhan-gpgk]

Where did you guys get music. Did you have a composer

[maverick]

Pretty good apart from the ending was abit anti - climatic. All that perfect synchronisation for that poor ending not worth it.

[giladshaked]

וואו. לא ידעתי שיש אנשים בארץ עם רמה כל כך גבוהה בפן הטכני של הקולנוע. מדהים!
התיקון צבע מעולה והעבודה עם הגימבל יצאה מדהים!

[lej_explains]

Add a bit more immersive sound design and an ending that makes sense (even something as simple as getting into a sketchy/ambiguous car like an ambulance).Overall pretty cool.

[KlyzmTheFirst]

could had a camera behind the suitcase as soon as the person opened it to leave it as a macguffin

[rohit_captures]

Sir, we are also making short film, but we are not getting that type of suitcase, how can we get that suitcase and where I can get... Please help us sir

[artemusj.]

Wow, this is GH4?Love the grading. What profile is this? I also love how you nailed the exposure.

[wildgamerrrz]

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