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Poorly written women Pt.57
Men Writing Women Edition

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[qutbuddeenabbas]

If I had a dollar for every time she bit her lips, I'd be hundredionnaire

[atherisGAY]

Men who think in terms of "alpha" and "high value" are making me physically cringe, one of the biggest red flags.

[cab]

Ralph has that Restraining Order RIZZZZ... LMAOOO!!

[crimxe]

Her eyes were as light as a summer day, but not too light because they were brown.

[Anindeterminateamountofbees]

Why always the fruit comparisons??? Like it’s always mangos or melons or plums it’s ridiculous

[Flame-rpyq]

My hands actually tense up whenever I hear “AlPhA mAn”
Like

[EvaMcpherson]

I could just imagine filming this in silence and someone walking in…

[jayjayeverett]

No women get into the service industry to get a paycheck and to go tf home.

[ArtsyBeau]

When male writers unapologetically use the phrase "alpha male", and it doesn't suggest the person is either from werewolf descent or a shapeshifter, just blows my mind. Cringe as fuck, but hey. To each their own, right.

[lockmonster]

Can we get a comparison/side by side of the real Naomi as this plays, so we can see the reality 🤣

The whole, "I'll wait for you after your shift, " gave me flashbacks

[Timber_On_Pawzz]

Help because my dad's name is Ralph and his new wife's name is Naomi 💀


Yk I really dont wanna be that person so I'm not gonna be like "mom im famous" but thanks for the likes, its appreciated. :)

[gamesinfoprofile]

That counter is so clean by the end of the scene.

[madelynnmellentine]

Then they swear they know women because they grew up with a mom😂

[danbirdneo]

Everyone who’s ever worked in the service industry is watching this through their fingers

[joeysung]

okay but why is it actually so hot when she does that

[bryanplant]

Your facial expressions are next level in these videos, bravo.

[SpikeHewho]

The mango sized breast hit me left field bro. 😅😂 Like did NOT expect to get hit with the mangos while scrolling.

[brick-that-hit-jason]

I heard the “mango” and “chocolate” parts, and now I rlly want of the those mango fruit cakes with chocolate toppings
They’re great

[AvangionQ]

The reason men write women like this is because most men will miss the first two or three times a woman will flirt with them as just her being nice.

[iambobtheoriginal]

I can’t do bro this my name is naomi 😭😭