how to describe a manufacturing cycle - ielts writing task 1 process diagram

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The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

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[heattransfer]

The diagram gives information about how plastic bottles are recyled.

Overall, the process consists of 9 stages and it starts with people throwing plactic bottles into containers and it ends with manufacturing the end products.

First, people throw their plastic bottles into containers. The bottles are then ready to be collected with lorries. The next stage is that, the collected plastic bottles are eliminated by workers by hand. After that, the bottles which are convenient to be compressed into blocks are moving to the next stage. Next part is the crushing stage. In this stage the blocks of plastics are put into two rotating gears to diminish the plastic bottle dimensions. This stage also covers washing the plastics. In the next stage, these tiny plastics are put into a machine which allows plastics to transform into plastic pellets. After that, these pellets are ready to be heated in order to form raw material. In the last stage of the process, the raw material is then manufactured into different kind of end products such things as t-shirts, plastic bottles, and recyling bags.





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[Not_so_Jinx]

The diagram illustrates how plastic is extracted and recycled from plastic bottles.
The process starts with used plastic bottles being collected from recycle bins. A recycling truck collects the bottles from bins placed around the city and transport them to the recycling facility. Where the bottles are sorted out by hand and then sent to a hydraulic compressor which compresses them into blocks.
These blocks then go to a crusher, which breaks them into smaller scrapes of plastic. After getting crushed, the scrapes are sent for a wash. Next, these scrapes are fed to a machine which process them down further and turn them into small pellets, finally these pellets are heated up to form raw materials, which are then shipped out and used to make various products such as bottles, containers, bags etc.
Overall, the recycling process consists of nine steps, which includes collecting and sorting of bottles, Compressing and crushing followed by turning them into pellets for raw materials. Products from raw materials are made and the cycle continues.

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