Paula Abdul Shares about Her Supercharged Life with Dr. Judy Ho

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Clinical psychologist Dr. Judy Ho, host of SuperCharged Life, sits down with the legendary Paula Abdul to share the secrets of Paula's success. She started her career as a Laker Girl dancing during NBA games at just 17, and yes, she lied about her age to get the job. She tells Dr. Judy about getting rejected from the Lakers tryouts twice before she finally got the green light.

Hear that incredible story and more on this episode of "Supercharged Life" with Paula Abdul.

*SuperCharged Life is produced by Stage 29, which also produces The Doctors.

About The Doctors: The Doctors is an Emmy award-winning daytime talk show hosted by ER physician Dr. Travis Stork and co-hosted by plastic surgeon Dr. Andrew Ordon, along with dermatologist Dr. Sonia Batra, OB-GYN Dr. Nita Landry, and neuropsychologist Dr. Judy Ho.

The Doctors helps you understand the latest health headlines, delivers exclusive interviews with celebrities dealing with health issues, debates and investigates health and safety claims, explains the latest viral videos and how you can avoid emergency situations, and serves up celebrity chefs to share the hottest and healthiest recipes and foods.
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Grammatically, the corrected headline is:

“Paula Abdul shares, with Dr. Judy Ho, her supercharged life.”

You know where to place the commas because you separate apart the prepositional phrase from the rest of the sentence.

An easy way to check this is to remove what you have written within the commas. If the sentence makes sense, then it’s correct.

Example: Paula Abdul shares her supercharged life.

If the sentence makes sense without the words within the commas, then it is correct.

Further editing:
1. Take “about” out. “About” makes the sentence awkward.
2. The pronoun “her” refers to the last noun in the sentence, which is Dr. Judy. Therefore, you must omit “her, ” and instead, write “Paula, ” for clarity.

The meaning of the sentence, in the way the sentence was originally written, implies Paula *and Judy* are sharing their supercharged life with the public. This is not correct. Thus, taking into account all corrections, the correct way the headline should read is:

Paula Abdul shares, with Dr. Judy Ho, Paula’s supercharged life.

Or:

Paula Abdul shares her supercharged life, in an interview, with Dr. Judy Ho.

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