IELTS TOEFL Writing - 9 Tools to Avoid Wordiness & Redundancy.

Good writing requires fewer words, not more. To get a higher score on the IELTS or TOEFL, you need to say as much as possible within a limited number of words. In this essay, we look at how to avoid wordiness and redundancy by writing tighter sentences. Use the 9 tools provided to make your writing better.

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[wisteria_yue]

Redundancy and wordiness is my largest problem in writing. It hinders my writing speed and thought process in an AP Language and Composition timed essay. Thank you for these tips, I will make use of this for my upcoming AP exam :)

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Thanks Adam for your lessons! You're right, less words and more ideas. 
Hope can use these tools correctly. 
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