Wires and the Concept of Breathing

Audio problem? :O
This has always been one of my favorite songs (:
I originally created this, or the structure of it, during my failed "hiatus." Came out nothing like I imagined -_-
I decided to go back and check it out today, to see if it was really worth..improving. No, it wasn't in good shape from the start, but I tried ^ ^''

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