[Follow Your Arrow] Map part 8

There is something off about this one but I cant seem to put my finger on it. I dunno, maybe its just me? Any how this is not the most exciting part but it was a good attempt at something slower I think.

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[dawnbrightlight]

I like the floating quality because it matches the music. Feels dreamlike as the two are just caught up in their love.

[EJKraft]

Beautiful work as always, I love your work so much!!


Based on your desc I'm hoping you're ok w critique? If not you can just ignore this !
You mentioned something seems a little off, and I believe that you could fix that with some slow in/slow out. While the animation is very smooth I believe it could be improved if you had more frames at the start/end of the motion arcs instead of them being evenly spaced. For example, when they are jumping on the rocks, I suggest having more frames as they land, and less frames as they jump. This helps the movement feel a little more natural! The key to “smooth” animation isn't always just having a lot of frames but spacing them out in a certain way. I really hope this helps you in some way, I look forward to seeing your next animation ^^

[laureleiwolf]

It’s so good, I don’t know how you make these gorgeous pieces of animation

[Laurenrdraws]

The thing that's off is that the cats move way too slowly, especially the jumping part

[QuietRage]

This looks wonderful! Thank you so much for participating! Do you have a sendspace link for it?

[Kotisnotacat]

the animation is way too smooth, you use too many frames, seems like the cats jump in the plase where gravitation is weak, so they can fly (especially the last shot, graystripe)
watch some videos and tutorials of actual cats jumping