The Super Mario Bros. Movie: REWRITTEN

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The Super Mario Bros. Movie: REWRITTEN 00:07:54
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[dannypalin]

I love how it's unanimously agreed that Luigi needed more screentime.

[rept]

I've seen that bit before, but the delivery of "Is that a frog suit?"
"I won't tell anyone how I saved you if you don't tell about the suit."
"DEAL!"
actually got me.

[dannyboots]

Toadsworth being Peach's parent through her childhood years is SO GOOD. The story is writing itself here!

[jwroot]

Wow. If this rewrite was in the Super Mario Bros Movie, this could've been and with no exaggeration the BEST Illumination film ever.

[theleaderoftheworld]

A few things I would like add is:

1. The Rainbow road shortcut could've been created by the Power Star.

2. I would've LOVED it if Luigi says something like, "You need a Player 2?" or, "Need a Co-op Partner?" when he's saving Mario, because it really adds the feeling of when you play the games and your friend, or most likely your brother/family member, joins in and helps you out.

3. After Mario & Luigi defeat Bowser, all the 7 power stars show up again, and Toadsworth returns them back to their kingdoms.

[MrWaspMan]

I love the idea of giving Luigi more to do, the addition of the Sand Land scene, and Bowser being made even more menacing. I still think the movie is great as it is, but I think this script would have made it fantastic.

[AlexDoc]

I do agree that Luigi should be the one storming off and Mario being nice, as fans typically tend to make Mario look like a bad brother when in reality he actually cares.
Edit- Also, I feel like Mario should have TOTALLY used more than the Tanooki Leaf and Cat Bell. The Fire Flower is his most iconic form, and even the Propeller Suit or Boomerang Flower would have totally worked. Maybe Mario steals a Koopa’s shell and spins around in it like the Blue Shell.

[ChloeVFX]

I have one thing to say. Well, two, but it still gets the point across.
1. Amazingly well-done rewrite, Charii.
2. We need a Luigi's Mansion movie.

[YannickJur]

24:57 Fun fact: Mario was originally intended to enter Peach's castle through a secret pipe system, according to concept art. Mario would've then traveled through the pipe and crash-landed straight on to the world map in the courtroom where Peach and the Toads are discussing Bowser's attack, including Toadsworth and Toadette.

[Icyfire]

Rewritten Bowser: "A stupid red hat"
Cappy: Ok time to die

[callumsparrow]

As much as I love this movie, I do wish it went on for a little longer than 90 minutes, even an extra 10 would’ve given the narrative more significant depth which you excellently provided.

[KaveonMatthews]

This was a really great rewrite that provided fixes to a lot of the problems some people had with the movie. You really have a knack for creating cohesive stories and put a lot of effort into this.

[YesmanForNamsey]

I don't understand why, but for some reason, I always feel way more fear in fearful moments in fan works than in the actual work, probably because they're a lot more unpredictable.

I loved this. I did enjoy the movie for the same reason as everyone else, the Mario celebration, but the more fleshed out story arcs of the brothers would've made me love it.

[GollyJolly]

I kind of wished that Peach still said that Mario is not important when they left because when she and Toad returns to The Mushroom Kingdom and announces that Mario didn’t make it one of the many toads could reply “Who’s Mario?” Making Peach really see how much she took Mario for granted.

[thefeatheredbutterfly]

I firmly believe that Nintendo held Illumination at *gunpoint* when they made the movie-

[Yoshi]

I WANNA SEE A REANIMATED COLLAB WITH THIS STORY IT WAS SOOO GOOOD❤❤❤

This was a great video Chariii5, I absolutely loved the new story, you and the illustrators did a fantastic job on this

[gorade]

It's cool to see you tackle a story with this kind of broad appeal approach. Your passion comes through as always, the amount of drawings you had to do man.

Maybe when Bowser's knocked back by the chest he rolls over cause of his shell and lands on his stomach?

[LucasHopkins]

I personally don’t have much of a problem with the story we got, but regardless I would’ve loved the movie even more if we got this, hope we get more rewrite videos cause this and the Forces one were so good

[FrancoDoodsGaming]

So glad I got the chance to watch the Mario Bros. Movie, but DAMN this is even better

[MessyJoy]

Now this, THIS is exactly what I would want the movie to be. Not needing to be a masterpiece but at least trying make us care more about the characters and the world of Super Mario Bros. You managed to make me care about everyone and pick my interest in the rewrite than the movie ever could. I also give you credit for the reimagened drawings, the artstyle is adorable and they perfectly describe how the scenes would go. 👍
(Edit: I would only disagree with putting Egad to the film as I feel like the movie already has a huge cast and putting him would be a bit too much)