Orphic Hymn to Athena, WIP

This is the first 1/3 of the Orphic Hymn to Athena. Set it to a Dt_td_t rhythm. I noticed a lot of internal rhyming on this one line by line which helped me to craft the weight of the melody that I am using for it. This is a work in progress and a rather impromptu filming but I wanted to share how the rhythm and melody are shaping up. Thanks for watching.

[greyfrancesmarkward]

Thank you for this! inspired me to pull out my drum for the first time in a bit

[holly]

Beautiful goddess, beautiful lady, beautiful music 🥰🥰🥰

[ericcrites]

Athena, I thank thee for your patronage. My heart continues to burst with fire at the honor of giving offering to thee. Accept my offerings as you continue to enrich my life. Oh wise queen of knowledge I ask that you help me better my life, and with your spear strike down all that may prove harmful to me. Beautiful Athena. I give my thanks unto thee

[vgang]

I played the orphic hym to heckatate up in the Welsh mountains were I live repeated as it seems to have placated carridwen it was magic

[wolf-claw]

This is perfect. Your entire channel is amazing. Please continue doing what you do ❤❤❤

[melittastafford]

How is the song coming along? If you ever feel up to recording/ sharing I would love to learn to play it one day. Thanks for sharing with us.

[galilea]

Could you translate it? Like with the Hekate hymn.