Descriptive writing using 5 senses ✍️ | How to write the perfect piece of descriptive writing

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[a.meforyou]

1. The crisp smell of trees and wet earth permeates my senses - invigorating and refreshing. The landscape before me is so still, I feel frozen in time. Like if I refrain from moving, I could become one with nature. Spalshes of pink and purple peek out from behind tall, proud trees. The scene blooms with life yet feels solitary enough to make me comfortable lose myself in it. I lean back on the bridge and inhale slowly. The hard wood digs into my back, grounding me. A soft breeze lifts my hair in front of my face, tickling my nose. The soothing silence is interrupted with the light sound of leaves rustling. I imagine the high-pitched chipping of birds with the loud rush of the river beneath me.

2. Tranquillity filla my veins as I happily burrow deeper into the warm, inviting sand. The morning sunlight gently strokes my face, lulling me to sleep with a mind-numbing intensity. Farther out, the sea continues to rhythmically crash against the sand. I can hear every rush of water. I pretend to be floatinf kn the water, continuously bouncing up and down. I lift a grape from the plate beside me. The moment I touch the round fruit to my mouth, a sweet tangy flavour fills my senses. I slowly chew so as to savour the liquid sweetness and soft texture.

3. Shivers rack my body as I behold the terrible scene around me. Placing a hard on the trunk of a gaunt tree emanating death, I try to steady myself. On the sidewalk, a man with his face shadowed by a top hat grins at me menacingly. Another chill goes through my body.
RING!
I jump at the obscenely loud sound of the clock striking twelve from the jutting tower on the massive hill. I have to stifle a terrified screm when I look at the horror of a castle beside the tower. The moonlight seems to shirk away from the walls so the castle appears to be ringed in darkness. Eveb from afar, the size of the castle is intimidating. Its tall spires pierce the midnight sky looking too much like swords for my comfort. I unconsciously take a step back in the cobbled street and bump into something. I turn around just to feel the blood drain from my face. A scream rips out of me at the sight of the skeleton swaying on the branch of a tree.

Please tell me if these are any good and how can I improve.

[laptopuser]

As I walk through the bustling streets of New York, I see many tall and fascinating buildings, with flocks of birds flying over one building to another, and many people walking through different directions, here and there, in this busy but lively city. The fresh smell of bread from the bakery waves over me, making my stomach crave. I went in to the bakery and see a variety of delicious, and glazing colorful pastries. The taste of the pastry melts in my mouth, making me feel joyed.

i think i went from describing a city to bakery goods lol i tried pls tell me where i need improvements.

[yogeshmohla]

great video.
I did an exercise... the gloomy night photo..
Here is what I tried...
The crescent of the moon barely lit up the smoggy city. The town had slumbered except for a few silhouettes of men visible against the dim moonlight. William trudged ahead staring at the spooky branches of the oak and the closed windows. It was ghost quiet except for the tapping of the ferrule against the rocky pavement. A flutter of chilly breeze stroked his long dark overcoat and almost wobbled his homburg cap. A stench of air from the open drain entered his lungs. He coughed loudly and the nightly wolves howled back in reply.

[vritti]

As I waited for green lights to turn to red so I can cross the street without much trouble, my ears were feeled with chatter of numerous people every overlapping the other making my head spin. There was still some time left before the lights turn back to red, I took this opportunity to admire the beautiful loftly building around me. As the lights turns it color, I walk away from this part of street to admire another beautiful piece by nature.

[charmleneboni]

As I write my novel, I envision each scene as a picture and it helps me to describe everything in detail.

[leedohyunfan]

For me it’s just so hard to put it in to words. I can describe it very easily but when I describe it it sounds so basic and plain.

[pakeezaarooj]

I have not seen any other video explaining so good. I understand each and every word. Thanks a lot for the most informative video.💖💖💖

[faerinted]

As I wait for the red lights to turn green, the noises of the numerous people passing by each other and the screeching sounds of the moving cars take over the entire silence. The sun revealing itself from the horizon allows its warm rays to land on the blue wall mirrors of the buildings standing tall on both sides of the immense road in front of me. I stick my head out of the car window to feel the mild air brush against my face. Some of its particles land on my tongue filling my mouth with breeze.

I don't know if this is good enough to create a clear image in the readers' minds but please give your honest suggestions on this piece of writing. Even if the suggestions are not very positive I'd still appreciate it. <33

[randus]

Really help full. I was really confused to write my assignment and you helped a lot. Keep going.

[katrina]

1st scene: As I walk through the fascinating garden, I am greeted with tingles from the grass and the smell of scented flowers. The bright, colorful colors of the trees and flowers glow under the beautiful rays of sunshine as butterflies dance harmonically to the sound of the soft wind. Sweet pollen flies gently into my mouth and lands perfectly on my tongue, filling me with the taste its delightful flavor. I feel every crevice of the warm wood as I’m walking along the small, moist bridge that stands above a puddle of water.

2nd scene: Sauntering across the coast, the delicate breeze hits my face ruffling my golden curls with its rhythm. With every step, my feet sink into the warm, soft sand, and salt flying with the wind hits my tongue infusing me with freshness. The sea sparkles as sunshine hits its waves while fish dance in the blue inducing calming, therapeutic sounds that fill me with ecstasy. The dazzling trees greet me by waving their branches transversely causing warm sand to fly at me.

[huzaifaimran]

I suppose no other video on this subject could be better than yours. You have made such a difficult topic a piece of cake giving examples through pictures. Great imagination!

[marjorieremando]

I'm still having a hard time even after watching the video because I don't have that wide vocabulary. But it was very informative and I've learned a lot from it. I do hope that I'll be able to finish my assignment using the knowledge I've gained from this video.

[blessingsking]

The city was bustling, and was literred with people moving to their various work places.
The building embodied majestic being blocking the voilent rays of the sun.
Here, i stood gazing at the red traffic light exhauted i leaned back on my car sit for rest.
The Traffic light flickered showing green i couldn't wait fora second more of torment . I droved as my car dashed like a jet through the road of Sholeland.

[ronnyo]

1st one: Gradually, stepping foot onto the grass a soft crunch sound climbed up my ears. Softness tinkled my toes allowing me to feel welcome. I am greeted with such delight from the beautiful trees. Scented flowers escalated into my nostrils. It also sat there in packs smiling enjoying the bright weather. The colorful trees lit up bright like a candle. I was mesmerized. Soft breeze grabbed hold onto my arms, as the sun began to rise, it felt a joy of excitement. Trees began dancing side to side.

[gug]

As I walk through the enchanced forest, I am greeted with the fresh scent of flowers.Their bright colours emit diluted contrast compared to sunlight. Chirping birds merely flutter in the naval blue absense. The trees woe in the presence of orange rays. The warm borrow, conjured up from the sprouts of the trees themselves, give a feeling of aliveness as I walk calmly.

[cryptogee]

This has given me an idea, instead of trying to dig these things directly from my head. In future I will try and find a similar image to the one I'm thinking about, this will greatly help me. I found myself pausing and really going for it, especially with the bleak image near the end.

Thank you.

[sup._.]

As I was walking across the path, admiring the towering skyscrapers. At the wide road there were loads of cars, having fascinating colours. I could feel the fresh air brushing against my face.
My face suddenly turned as pale as the moon as I saw a car rushing towards my direction. I was befuddled as I noticed that the headlights had already turned green. I could already felt the disgruntled noise of traffic. So I immediately tried to reach to the pavement.

[humblegentle]

This helped my daughter so much and as a poet and songwriter it gave me great happpiness watching her improve and embrace her language

[maryamchannel]

I am no writter but can someone please rate this out of ten and list my improvements

I dash along the busy streets with skyscrappers and cars.I hear the loud screeching noises of the cars and the muffled voices of children and adults.i feel burdened by the sounds and seem very distracted due to my anciety around large crowds of people.That was when CRASH i wasnt thinking straight and bumped into a speeding car. What was this feeling ? It was so trilling is this how it feels to be dead ?