'If You Ever Freeze Time, Make Sure To Follow The Rules' | Creepypasta | Scary Story

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[notproductiveproductions]

That sucks. Imagine stopping time and NOT being able to move a Frenchman down the stairs as he tries to climb up

[mainlyglitches]

Throughput the story I wondered about how he could move through air molecules and breathing, thought the writer was just overlooking that detail, but it surprised me when they brought it up, it’s not really something people consider in time stoping story’s so I’m happy it was talked about here.

[sara_c]

Something about the description of grass when time stops really freaked me out. Great story. 10/10 for your wonderful narration, Stephen.

[isaacivans]

After hearing this, Dio being freaked out during his fight with Jotaro makes even more sense.

[juisnijose]

The limitations in the character’s power is interesting and very refreshing. Its really good material for like a mini series in my opinion. Hey light your narrations are truly amazing and always make my day better thank you very much.

[red_adept]

When random people from the internet have better stories and production value than a Netflix original.

[WL]

I was scared this would be one of those “I got a list of rules and they’re all some dumb unrelated bullshit” stories but what a refreshing story this was

[dizzydial]

As I got older, being able to freeze time I noticed might have had some of the problems this story had as limits. "How could I breathe? Or see? Would light particles also be frozen?" It's cool to see a story actually considers some of those things in a semi realistic way.

[dreemurrprince]

This story was amazing, the mental strength of Sean to be able to even do what he did is incredible. I truly respect the power of human determination he wields to defend our universe. He gave everything he had to protect us from something beyond our understanding, and we will never truly know. He stretched himself across time and space itself to stop this, feeling pain we likely cannot comprehend. Rest well Sean. You’re a hero.

[timangar]

From a physics perspective, him having to be close to where he was when he stopped time in order to release it is awesome because otherwise he would break the universal speed limit of lightspeed.

[ronwll]

Jesus. That was one of the Most creative stories I've ever heard. If science one day figures out how this can be real... time manipulation i mean, then this seems like it'd be the closest thing to reality. Excellent story. The author should write a prequel about the original egg head as he is in the present as that 14 year old boy with a rap sheet already, seeing as his future self was caught and killed by Sean in that warehouse.

[farmtomeme]

Creepy pasta titles be like "If you take a dump in a public bathroom, always close the lid..."

[flappy]

i dunno why, because it's a tired trope.. but i love time manipulation stories very much. they're always interesting to me despite their predictability.
nice job narrating!

[guy]

The two rules were you can't start Time if you are not close to your original position and nothing moves in time, so that means he could've just wind and unwind every few steps on the way to his fiance, right?

[rosslindaawang]

Such a tragic story Stephen. I assumed in the beginning, when having powers like freezing time, will have bad consequences. Thanks for the narration Stephen. Keep posting more

[vd]

This kind of thing makes you realize just how horrifying it is for DIO when this happened, seeing Jotaro twitch or look around in stopped time, and eventually stopping time against him.

[mrfriendhorror]

The author of this is crazy talented. I loved the concept of time manipulation here. And of course, excellent narration as always!

[CoriMultipass]

The description of the antagonist is so creepy and awesome. Love that funky little egghead. Such a visually striking villain.

[drunkbillygoat]

I think we need a part 2 of this. Where Sean somehow lives and goes to fight the things that want in. This story was pretty awesome

[taylorcarollo]

If Sean could theoretically exist in multiple areas of time within the same universe at the exact same time then perhaps in another strand of time he's still alive. The author could expand on this and the kid that was found to have a genetic link to the unknown man in a future update, if they're so inclined to update this story 😁 also, when egghead Sean went to touch Delilah as she was moving around with time stopped, that's really interesting. Maybe when she saw something in the bad egghead's eyes he gave her some type of power👀??