Allstate Mayhem Commercial

Me and my friends liked the Allstate Mayhem commercials, so we decided to make one for a school project. Constructive criticism and feedback would be greatly appreciated.

[waltsoph]

LOL! Not bad guys! Awesome fan made Mr. Mayhem ad. Thanks for sharing this video.

[PumpkinHipHop]

This is awesome for a bunch of kids messing around. Keep at it, you might go somewhere with this!

[supressorgrid]

This clip shows creativity, humor and parody. Give the dude a break and hit like.

[jpvideopro]

Great job, remember in the real world tv commercials are either :30 or :60 seconds. It's always a challenge to hit the time right on the money.

[AntiqueAngel]

I'll let the rating bar speak for it's self.

[nikki]

I thought it was pretty good...don't let the haters on here get ya down. No matter what good you do, there will always be people who are so insecure with their own lives that the only fun they have is bringing others down to their level. Keep up the good work guys :)

[Bunnietenou]

Ok it wasnt a bad idea and it was kinda cute, but i think the charm of mayhem commercials is how short they are. If your going to make another try to keep it short and to the point. keep in mind most commercials (even if thier made to be a little longer) and usually cut to be around 30 seconds long.

[YtseFrobozz]

"I'm a guy doing a poor job of imitating a series of commercials that you love. Because I made the title of my video exactly what you're searching for, you just can't help but click on me. Now you're going to get into your car and drive into the nearest telephone pole just to get the sound of my annoying voice out of your head, and if you bought cut-rate insurance, you might not be covered. So get Allstate, and be protected from mayhem... like me."

[Bootsdagreat]

Dude that was pretty sweet!! What state was that in ???

[Richy]

I agree. Great job! But less wordy more Tree! Mayhem is not exactly know for being chatty!

[Whydopeoplehate]

@cdmoney100 thanks bro, i love constructive criticism! oh wait..

[shadow]

@cdmoney100
Man, I see why they say don't try this at home in the stunt part of the commercial.

[wolfarmy]

I can see the stop sign. Get a bigger branch.

[genuineaid]

That's cute and Funny :)
Would be nice if your parents would let you crash some cars hehehehe

[McCutYou]

um try not fuckin laughing the whole time

[deepfreezevideo]

You'll get there eventually. Nice first try though.
Punch up the script and make it more to the point.
Thumbs up ;-)

[familyguy]

Thumbs Up If u Slapped Someone After Watching This !

[SoldierFortune]

are any of you even old enough to drive? You all look like yo 14 and younger

[cloverleafehomeboy]

Not tryin to hate but u got a long way to go befor this looks good right now it looks cheap as fuck

[Frossiart]

My only criticism is, your skit is just a little too wordy. If you study their commercials some more you'll see that their monologue is very reserved in its delivery. Good job otherwise.