IELTS Live - Task 1 Writing - Band 9 Strategies

IELTS Task 1 Writing
The following chart shows data for reasons people migrate to and from the United Kingdom in a given year. Report the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write AT LEAST 150 words.

[martintao]

Hello, sir. I have a question about the sentence "Thirdly, nearly twice as many people left Britain looking for work at 22%, 『than』 those who came to the country in hopes of finding a job, at 12%." Why shouldn't we use "as many ... as ..." rather than "as many ... than"?

[xsoccer]

"An introduction is a way for the writer to introduce the topic he is going to write about to the reader. In an overview, the writer gives a brief explanation that is a summary of what he is going to talk about". I found this on the internet and every single teacher has the same view except you. Sir, I don't mean to offend you, instead, want to suggest to you, to please recheck this issue so that people like me don't get confused.

[Izzat-bjle]

only one word can decrease 1, 5 score wow!!!! 23:00