Screenplay Feedback from Shore Scripts | A Valuable Lesson Learned!

Shore Scripts Feedback

In this video, I share my experience submitting my first draft to the prestigious Shore Scripts Screenwriting Competition and the valuable feedback I received. I'll take you through the notes I received and the insights I gained to improve my script. Learn from my mistakes and discover why you should never submit your first draft to a competition. Plus, get tips on how to take criticism as a screenwriter and elevate your storytelling skills. Don't miss this behind-the-scenes look at the Shore Scripts competition and the lessons I've learned along the way!

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[ryanandrew-allen]

I was fortunate to get positive feedback from The Golden Script competition for my first feature screenplay. I also got middle of the road feedback from Slamdance. It's cool to see the range between the two. Slamdance was more critical on formatting and disliked that I was descriptive on shots and director language, Golden Script commended it for passion and writing voice. Both were good to receive in their own way.

[Derplander]

What I disliked the most about shore script coverage, the notes I received were focused on describing my script in greater detail, instead of simplifying, what's good and what should be cut out.

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