(EYESTRAIN WARNING) No One, Everyone, Your Mama | Swiftpaw PMV |

I felt like this song brought out neon vibes so i made everyone neon

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[icecreamthemaltese]

The fact that Swiftpaw died in the same book as Bluestar makes it even sadder. If he waited just a little bit longer, one of the first things Firestar would have done was make him and the others warriors.

[intergalactic]

this is stunning. god, the way swiftpaw looks into the dog's eyes at the end and sees himself and completely breaks down hits so hard. people better make this popular

[chewzX]

i love the depiction of swiftpaw attacking the dogs here. instead of being super brave and strong, hes filled with fear and regret the moment he realizes what he got himself and brightpaw into. poor guy ):

[nyx]

2:04 Theres something about this scene that really hits hard, the way swiftpaw starts crying. It just really make the fact that hes just a kid sink in and makes you feel even more bad for him

[Chillithidd]

As I've seen another commenter say, I love that you made Swiftpaw almost the same size as Longtail. Everyone seems to forget that he was old enough to be a warrior, so I really love when people make him a size that is fitting for his actual age.

[_kaleido]

I love how Longtail’s tail can just casually drape over Swiftpaw’s shoulder while he’s sitting lol

[rapidriver]

We can't know how Swiftpaw was feeling when he died, but I love the choice you made to make him feel *small*. He was very vocal about how he was a grown cat and deserved to be a warrior, but it all comes crashing down when he realizes in his final moments that he wasn't as invincible as he thought. It's such a hard and cruel lesson for him to learn...a lesson useless to a dead cat. You almost wish he went out feeling brave instead...

Also, the color palettes and designs in this ROCK. I love purple Swiftpaw. Blue-tinted Brightpaw. Curly Cloudpaw. And hands-down the cutest version of Thornpaw ever seen.

[MissDelrus]

1:42 honestly the look in swiftpaw's face is giving slight regret. He looks like hes trying to hold it all back and hes like " we have to do it " like they have no choice. it was full of determination tho. It was also giving - " im sorry " idk why it just was.

[mommyclaws]

The transitions in this from scene to scene was so interesting… I really liked the inclusion of Brindleface’s death because alot of Swiftpaw content shows him as prideful and angry, but how he’s shown here… He really saw how the dogs were affecting his clan and his friends and he wanted to prove himself by doing something right… He looks so scared and helpless when he’s grabbed by the dog. This video does such a good job with expressions, horror, and story telling.

also LOOOVEE the bright colors and designs! Perhaps I’ll make fanart someday

[serenity-studios]

the neon characters contrasting against the dark background really makes me feel uneasy, along with the music. Like you already know what's coming for Swiftpaw and Brightheart even if you haven't read the books.

[Haihappn]

Oh and before i forget. 2:15, brightpaw. this is a really correct drawing of what it could look like. the eye, the swollen side. i wish the erins/ultimade guide/etc would portray her like this and not with a "little scar" over her eye, because ableism

[remingtontherat]

im in love with the design at the end, brightheart is always shown just with a little scar and no eye, or a weird leaf over her eye. a dog would definitely do a lot of damage to her face, like shown in the drawings. also I love the color palette it’s so neat

[lapislake]

I know it isn't the topic of this video and she only shows up for a second but!! THE TAWNYKIT DESIGN IS TO DIE FOR!!! I LOVE HER SO MUCH!! Amazing use of neon colors!! Everything looks so cool

[hemispher]

people seem to forget that swiftpaw went out with his mouth still gaped in a snarl. but this is also a nice way of looking at it. it makes you remember that all he wanted was to be a warrior. i saw someone say it lets you understand that he's just a kid when he breaks down after looking into the dog's eyes. but he's not a kid. he was old enough to become a warrior. he had only done the thing to try to prove that he was capable enough. he was blinded by rage and frustration at bluestar are think about how much if a dumb idea it was. brightpaw had probably went along with it because she saw swiftpaw as their group of apprentices' little leader.

swiftpaw didnt deserve any of what happened to him. i know people love brightheart now, but i wouldve been totally fine if if swiftpaw lived instead of brightheart...

[ember-fire]

Oh, goodness, this was stunning and so beautifully done. The colors all complimented each other very well, and the expressions made each frame really pop! The way this entire thing was animated was pleasing to the eyes and ears, wonderful job!

[inkling-ywjr]

swiftpaw wouldve been a wonderful warrior, gosh he deserved so much better, he shouldve lived longer to

[mooneatsworms]

still love this, something i really like is how it puts the viewer in swiftpaw's shoes. the dogs are never explicitly shown, just the aftermath and no real explanation as to why animals are being found dead. when the dogs finally do show up its not portrayed as swift and bright going to square up against them, it looks like they're just trying to decipher what's hunting in their territory, and by the time they and the viewer realize its far too late. (knowing his story of course spoils this, but to a person going in blind i feel they'd definitely find it just as unexpected as the apprentices did, (well maybe a little less, theyre not actively being torn apart ig.) ur visual storytelling is always peak omg

[mintysbowtie]

This looks gorgeous!! I love the color palette you chose and the way you drew the characters emotions is stunning. I also love how you decided to add more of the scenes that lead up to swift paw and bright paw getting attacked rather than just the attack itself, it really adds more depth to the video makes the viewer feel a sense of dread knowing what’s coming for the two but not seeing it front and center and the end where it cuts to them being found but not being shown Is really the cherry on top of this awesome piece of work you created!! amazing job!! :D

[DreemyDreemz]

They're all so cute! I love that Ashpaw and Fernpaw look the exact same as each other AND their mom. It's so silly
The ending wasnt so cute, but it was so great omg

[tamatafrog]

i love love love this so much! their designs are so good. i love the different transitions, the zooms, the expressions. everything ties so well together. i also love you including scenes we don't often see (like brindleface being dragged back to camp) and how accurate their sizes are. I think a lot of us forget that swiftpaw was infact well into warrior age and would've been around the same size as a warrior, not as small as other apprentices.