C1 Writing Tips (aiming for C2) | How to Write Better Essays: Part 2

C1 and C2 Writing Tips - How to Write Better Essays.

In this video, I show you how to edit a piece of writing and bring it up to a C2 level. If you are studying for the Cambridge Advanced or IELTS, then this video is essential viewing.

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[manuelmendoncaaraujo]

As an EFL teacher, I am very excited to share these videos to my students. A million thanks to you sir. Please make more videos on using the advanced synonyms and antonyms in writing. God bless you.

[ermelindalombardo]

Finally a teacher that explains us how to write better in English. 🎉🎉🎉. Thank you so much for your enlightening videos.I've become addicted to them 🎉🎉❤❤
Wether you have to take an English exam or not, your lessons will aid in improving our knowledge of the language.🎉🎉

[leandrocimarolli]

These videos are just amazing! These comparisons and all the synonyms you use to avoid repetition or just to sound more formal... that's exactly what I needed. I can't thank you enough!

I "shadow" the texts and then I take my own notes. Sometimes I use other advanced vocabulary to practice my own writing skills on the same sentences that you're already replacing things.

[juan]

Thanks, Stephen, I enjoyed the authenticity of your step-by-step approach. Drafting and editing, and further proofreading, are key to success. Congrats on the good work! Two thumbs up! 👏👏👏

[shebnemhuseynli]

I started to watch several Youtube videos to improve my writing skills. I pick and will work on your videos because this is the video I want exactly. You just don’t say mistakes as other teachers, you explain how this sentence can be better. Thanks❤❤❤

[tomibru]

I'm preparing for the Cambridge C2 Proficiency Exam and your writing tips are invaluable! Thank you!

[niginaabdullayeva-tgcc]

im gonna take my ielts soon, thank you for your videos sir, they helped me a lot while preparing for my test, I absolutely love all of them, the best channel ever.thank you!!🎀

[rubens]

To say that these videos are a treasure is an understatement. Great content, simple, instructive, and engaging! Keep at it!

[semihaksoy]

I like your format. I always wondered how to convert/enhance even an A1 sentence into C1-C2 level. I even used Chat-GPT to get help for that. Thanks for your videos

[Learnfromtheworst.-grzi]

Thanks for the video! Learning a lot of stuff.

[A-ANIMATION]

Please make more videos in this part especially...❤😊

[Taoufiqqaba]

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[victorsaman]

Fortunately I got you sir,
I started today
Hope to meet you with my result❤

[User-us]

Just noticed new lessons ❤thank you!! 🤓👍🏻

[aradia]

Thank you so much!!! I really love your videos!

[dreamandmakeit]

Hi, do you take English classes online? Now attained a B1 - B2 level. I want to improve my level into C1.

[MyDuckGlow]

hello, can you please make more videos like this one ? peace and greetings from Romania!🎆

[layloabdullayeva]

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[aminaomar]

Do you do online classes I really need to improve my writing

[SantiagoDeSimone]

Here's the final version:

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In summary, it is my firmly held belief that every human being can aid in protecting our planet. Although I have only touched upon three areas, there are numerous others.