How NOT to Write Internal Dialogue

The second of the 10 worst writing mistakes I've made. Telling your readers what your character is thinking at all times is a great way to ensure they end up bored and disengaged.

If I had a time machine, I'd tell my past self to avoid these writing mistakes. I'll go through each and show how you can avoid making the same mistakes, with a few examples from my own past writings.

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[goblingoose]

I've seen this a lot in webb comics. The authors are scared of the audience getting disconnected from the main character, So they scribe out back story and spots for every single little thing the mc does. One that i've read just doesn't do any of that and it makes the main character so much more intriguing.

[graysontaylornyc]

Watch the full video here for all 10 writing mistakes: youtu.be/JLMDk9w1qeI