Golden Time AMV

[JustSoFreeKinAwesome]

I like the concept that you were going for, but as Vita mentioned previously the editing needs a lot of technical work. The concept is great, but now your execution is lacking, something that Vita also has to work on :P Nonetheless, the transitions should be a little more on beat, and the effects could be toned down, especially if you're not going to use them consistently throughout the AMV. And I would try to stray away from mixing scenes waaay too much. It's hard to tell a story, something I messed up during my AMV because I had two totally different concepts and editing styles while making it. Also, scenes when they're talking aren't super bueno, but that's more of an "advanced" thing per se, because it does severely limit the scene selection that you get. General rule/pro-tip: If you're doing scene selection, go episode by episode to follow a more chronological story for your AMV, and get picky with your scenes. It helps in the long run, especially when you start doing MEPs and things. Great start though!

[vitathevoiceactress]

this was good, but the timing needs to be a little better. Try not speeding up clips too much cause it makes the amv look a little weird, . Another thing is that, it needs to be more on beat as well, the transitions could have been better too. Other than that i liked it :) keep up the good work!