Write your own story

i made this video with the intention of making a commercial for a pen brand called Pentel and also trying to tell my own story with it too I wrote these text I was narrating almost 5 years ago and it still speaks to me so I wanted to honor my younger self by still taking his advice to heart and for the audience I hope it resonated with you if it does then make sure to subscribe and like the video, it helps a lot, thanks.

[antarasinha]

I'm finding this video very creatively spiritual in a sense that we are embarking on a blissful inner journey of our mind and painting the landscape of our inner reality beautifully. I couldn't hear all the words with clarity because of the disturbances by audio but I'm feeling here the unchanged inner self against the backdrop of ever changing outer world. Thank you. It's a great idea for creative self-expression. Thanks again. 🌈😇🙏🙋

[Lightskin]

"that was cool" - me directly after finishing this video. My only criticism brother (and I say this out of love and I hope you would critique me in the same manner) is that I struggled to hear your voice over the music. Great video though bro, keep it up

[contmarks]

You hold the pen to your life's narrative—make it extraordinary!

As Maya Angelou said, "There is no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside you." Your experiences and dreams deserve to be expressed.

Embrace your uniqueness and take the first step—whether it’s writing, speaking, or sharing, let your voice be heard.

[kryptonera]

This was really beautiful🙏❤️
Sometimes we forget and lose our selves in life…. It’s always have that reminder, to never forget where we came from and why we did it.

[pentel_au]

I love the human aspect of this story! Highly inspirational!!

[dhwjsb]

This will probably be the only video I watch of yours but keep the grind up keep the hard work up and it will pay off. It may not pay off in the way you think so stay open minded. If you @ me I will respond but it prob won’t be for a minute. Life is short so enjoy it while you can!

[souhaibgouled]

I repeated this video many times to remember who i am and what is the purpose of my life. I feel bad since i lost my real identity, i was going straight toward my dreams but i totally deviate 😢. I hope one day i will be proud of myself and write every second of my life

[Ghostingstraightaway]

Insha'Allah, I hope we all make it there. Ameen.
Amazing shot tho 👏🏻

[userheiliyup]

THIS VIDEO IS INSANE
YOU ARE REALLY GREAT BUDDY!

[Jade-rujy]

Brilliant, Keep up the great work. Subtitles would be great.

[nurazackria]

Alhamdulillah everyone's faith ( naseeb ) ( Khader ) called life stories are already written by Allaah and we humans walk on the laid road sometimes we lose our path and then walk back, no road map is given but instructions are available on do and Dont. Every day is a new lesson and a test on a new page from fajar till Esha. From birth till death, it is automatically written and taken to the head for results after death. Some are in the process and whereas some are in the finishing stage, hope and pray we all have a beautiful successful story for the angles to be excited to carry out the ledger with all our investments from this world to begin the next chapter or episode.
Alhamdulillah

[imDeate]

Beautiful ngl unlike the other guy said i think the audio track was just loud enough

[mieiy]

Oh for some reason this made me cry Great job bro

[xnn]

Very creative video, I like the style.

[mehrinkhan]

so nicely shot, must say! how do you color grade?

[gastronomee_]

fellow young creator here. i'm reflecting on a lot of the same thoughts that you do; navigating your 20s and this big hairy thing called life. rooting for you!

FYI, for anyone reading this - if you're in your teens/20s and feeling lost - i believe you stumbled across this comment for a reason. new page here sharing recipes and reflections. hope to see you around.

[stescarvalho]

OMG that's so amazing and inspirational 😍🥰🤩

[Dynamic_G]

what camera did u use to shoot this video? great inspirational work

[matthias-zwnb]

good job bro! How do you write your scripts for videos like this? Do you have some advice?

[sayershaik]

Only one page?? i wrote a whole book for my future self ah....i guess i am boasting 😅